Wow... second person is not allowed on fanfiction. but I'm not telling on you. This is good. :D

This is probably my favorite fanfic version of Ror showing Dan who he is.

It's so much more natural than some of the stories.

I really enjoyed the subtlety of this piece... an instant fave!

Well that was a bit different. But very, very good! I like the awkwardness, it felt really tangible through your method of writing. Dan's figiting at the table, not knowing what to say, the comparison to the bad date, it all gave the reader a very apt description of the mindset of the former Nite Owl. The ending was a pleasent surprise as well. Well done!

I read this amazing piece of art, a Japanese comic, as nerdy as it can be assumed to be, it was amazing, colorful in a abstract and vivid beauty with it's plot and signature details. Like this story, handful of words, sprinkles of hidden meanings and double negatives, its absolutely beautiful. Can't help, but think of this a romance. Whichever genre it's undeniably beautiful, vague, worth me ponder. I wish perhaps one day I can use this unique style into my own. Thank you for writing it.

Ahh, this is cute. I especially like Dan recognizing their diner encounter as the bad date that it appears. I hope theres mroe of this.