| Reviews for A New Life |
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   Isobel Hatchett chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 I should probably let you know that while Chatte is the word for a female cat, its almost never used that way. It means pussy. Not like the insult, but like the vulgar term for vagina. |
| Kushka chapter 22 . 8/10/2017 Great story |
| TinaF chapter 22 . 2/23/2017 Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing. |
| bellachaos chapter 22 . 5/4/2016 I enjoyed this fic, especially the beginning when you were setting up all the characters and their backgrounds/motivations/etc. I feel like the last few chapters were a bit rushed, but I liked the story overall. Thanks! |
| Tee dree chapter 14 . 2/29/2016 I liked your fic's plot. |
| The Ice Goddess chapter 15 . 9/12/2015 Another tiny nitpick... amber is a golden color, not a red color. Considering I believe you were meaning not as RED as they used to be, but not as GOLD as Carlisle's, you probably messed up the words because I'm pretty sure you used amber as a correct eye color earlier. And, for the record, I just want to eat Jasper up! He's just so awkward and unsure in this story; it's a nice change from the usual dominant Major Jasper in other stories! But, don't get me wrong, I love me a dominant Jasper too! ;) |
| The Ice Goddess chapter 13 . 9/12/2015 I'm sorry, I LOVE your story so far, but could you maybe PLEASE change the 'Commander' to 'Major'? That is a major flaw as most people know he was a major. I'm not usually this nitpicky, but for some reason that really just bugs me. Either way, FANtastic so far! :) I'm not logged in, but the name I'm writing is my username if you want to talk to me for some reason lol. I know some authors really like to respond to reviews. |
| Thata chapter 22 . 9/14/2015 Hi there, How are you? I've found your fic in someone's favorite list and I'm glad I gave it a chance, because "A New Life" is such a great story. I was hooked and finished in just some hours! This Bella is so fragile and so strong ate the same time. Jasper was a little awkward near her, but he is lovely and the little Abigail is simply adorable... I was just afraid for a moment that she'd be Edward's mate, though I think he redeemed himself at the end. Congratulations for your wonderful fic and thanks for not pulling it out of FFnet. Kisses from Brazil, Thais. |
| jacksperluvr chapter 21 . 2/1/2014 I just reread this qnd I still really like it |
| Maggieblock chapter 22 . 7/26/2013 Loved this story! Read it in one day! |
| Mollysoaphie123 chapter 11 . 7/12/2013 Uh oh. This ain't good...Lovin' this story! :) :D ;) |
| jasperdamonwhitlock chapter 22 . 6/13/2013 This was a great story... I wish there was more |
| January chapter 22 . 6/12/2013 thanks for posting ;) |
| Raven J. Haile chapter 22 . 6/12/2013 This was sweet, so so sweet. :3 |
| TwiSagaLover chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 wow! i feel bad for poor bella |
