| Reviews for One Of The People |
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Guest chapter 50 . 8/24 Ah hah! I knew something was up in the first place when she saw Eywa and her spirit animal was an atokirina but for her to be a Tsahik?! Wowey! That is a really big responsibility. Tsu'tey though now reminds me of the Joanna before XD poor boy but I know he has someone to help him regain himself w, also... 7 moon cycles!? That is really quick! Are they gonna do the bow chicka wow wow? If so, who will teach Joanna? It'll be hilarious if Tsu'tey gonna teach her XD. Oh the children~ I just wanna cuddle them all! w |
Guest chapter 50 . 8/20 Hello! I am really grateful that you have decided to continue on with this story! From what I can gather from your comments, you have been very busy these past years with your education. So let me just congratulate you for your accomplishments! You are awesome! In regards of the story, I really enjoy how you go into detail with each characters’ expressions( ex. The swishing of their tails and flattening of their ears- an aspect that can be easily forgotten by many, including me often times!) and relationships with others( ex. Tsu’tey and Leti’s cute cousin moments!) Also with the Na’vi cultures and clothing! Your story has given me great happiness, laughter, and sadness(during the sad parts). Let me once again say that I appreciate your work and thank you for publishing each chapter on this web. I know writing isn’t an easy process, but each end result of your chapters is in my definition amazing! Can’t wait to read what you publish next. Take care and as the Na’vi say, “ Irayo!” |
theoakleafbearer chapter 50 . 8/19 I KNEW IT! 333 |
ghostFACERS95 chapter 36 . 8/17 I am obsessed with this story and your writing, I love how imaginative and detailed you are and I find myself falling in love with every single character whether they are familiar to me or not! And honestly this is probably terrible of me but I love your characters so much I have an itch to see everyone’s happy little story, like Xuret (I really hope he finds someone too!) and Arat and Anaya and of course the lovely pairings of Cheryl and Noren and Norm and Tarazi, I love them all! (I even loved Imaz and his brother with the little part they played lol) |
Soph chapter 48 . 8/9 I'm beyond excited to have discovered that you're continuing this behemoth of a story until the end. I was lucky enough, around seven years ago, to stumble across a dreadfully inactive Avatar fandom page and discover this, and I've been with you every chapter of the way since. I re-read One of the People from time to time because your worldbuilding and character control is so exceptional, and I seriously love returning to this world whenever the homesickness hits. I'm beyond excited to see where this will go & how Joanna and Tsu'Tey's story will end up. Lots of love! |
Xahraxs chapter 49 . 8/1 Been a while since I read this last. Will anything with the actual movie sequels be added? The new human who prefers being with the Na'vi than his own. Hell's Gate is back, new humans, etc? |
Guest chapter 49 . 7/28 Haha oopsie! In my excitement I got the two chapters mixed up! XD |
Guest chapter 49 . 7/27 I thought my eyes were deceiving me when I saw two new chapters! Two! Freaking TWO! Oh my lord I thought I would never see this day! You don't know how much I wanted to scream! I couldn't since it was already 2 am! I reread it just to pass the time but when I saw that the end was 49 instead of 47 I literally tried to hold in my squealing! Oh my goodness it's good to have you back! Chapter 48 made me want to cry TwT but chapter 49 made me smile! Its so great that your gonna finish this story! Your a great writer! I also read Partner of a bad blood and This thing called parenting XD anyway, Great to have you back! Hope you have a great day/night! |
KenjiSnow chapter 49 . 7/27 I was on a roadtrip for about 8 days and I read this for 3 of them! My love of Avatar resurfaced during the trip and I found this fic recommended on a list! You can imagine my heartbreak at seeing it was incomplete and the ancient creation date; there's no way it could've still been active! But the newest update was listed as this year so I was so happy to realize it was being picked up again. This fic is the perfect example of a fully developed fanwork! It blends into the series so well and the characters, even those on the side, are dynamic and extremely fleshed out. The development of the characters has been glorious to progress though, although I found myself ripping my hair out as I do at all all slow burns. Joanna is most definitely NOT on the track for Mary-Sue'dom and seeing her progress and mature was astounding. The detail in the writing is exquisite and the entire fic is just so well written! I understand the fic was dropped for some time (I think 10?) but it feels like there is no separation in the chapters being written! I look forward to seeing more added on to this store over time. My only complaint is I feel as though the "Hidden Human Compound" was pulled in and forgotten at stages; there was a huge gap of multiple chapters from the mention of Joanna following another Avatar to the introduction of the group. To my knowledge it hasn't been mentioned since, but I'm not entirely sure I mind that since I'm wondering what their involvement with the planet is. I would like, as a reader, to either see development on the Hidden Group within the next few chapters or have them dropped in favor of other storyline-based drama; although I understand if this is not a possability due to the author pre-planning chapters. When I read read the "Joanna follows Not-Tsu'tey" scene I assumed it had been the arrogant and rude Na'vi who had been his student that had confronted and insulted Joanna. As the chapters drew on I realized that was not the case. All in all, this is a WONDERFUL fanfic and I hope it is continued and, eventually, finished!~ (I apologize if I seem very formal or cold, that is definitely not my intention. Thank you /so much/ for writing such a gorgeous piece; it's honestly a Tolkein-level project with all the time, effort, and love poured into it! In fact, it's more so since the LotR trilogy is only 580k-ish words and this is heading into the 800k zone!) |
AbominableToast chapter 49 . 7/24 I am beyond ecstatic that you’re back! This is by far my favorite Avatar FanFiction and I’m so glad that it’ll be getting updated again! Can’t wait to see the two finally tie the knot after all this time! |
theoakleafbearer chapter 49 . 7/20 I am so looking forward to the ceremony! |
gossamermouse101 chapter 49 . 7/18 We love one big happy family |
rosie.pine chapter 48 . 7/5 I haven’t logged in to this site in YEARS and when I do, randomly so, I see there’s a new update for this and I’m not lying when I say I almost CRIED! |
Dulce chapter 48 . 7/1 Man, I almost CRIED when I saw this story had a new chapter. Forget the "almost". I downright CRIED and SCREAMED when I was just taking a stroll in this site and the tags and then this fic presented itself with the date of the last update being of this year. I had thought this fic forever lost. One of my favorites in this fandom. The Joy I felt to see it updated. GOD! I've just been re-reading it for the past 3 days because I didn't want to miss anything. And once again it just captured me completely and this chapter is just marvelous and I was literally shaking when I started reading it because of all the emotion. THANK YOU! |
Lily Borja chapter 1 . 6/30 omg... I haven't been on in months and I come back to this, I'm almost in tears, wow I haven't even been able to bring myself to read it, wow... I'm so excited I didn't think you were going to update again, but wow, thank you so much it really has brought a big smile to my face and made my heart race. |