Wow! You have amazed me with the depth you have given Rory and Tristan, and what's more is that you write them so effortlessly. Their problems, emotional, psychological, and physical, just ooze off the screen and make me feel for them. You are extremely talented as a writer, and I highly encourage you to pursue a professional career in writing (if you haven't already). This story, though unfinished, has awed me and I should be so lucky to be able to write with the grace, emotion, power, and style with which you do!

keep goin!

thank you, finaly a story that keep the character of tristan dugray and make him a real person with a past, a future, goals. I always think tristan was more than the handsome boy who infuriate rory. He was handsome, clever, comes from a wealthy family since generation. But after all they were other boy with money and good look but it was him the king. it has to say something about him. people choose him above other. I think he was already a leader without to stay in this place he had to be more dangerous, he was tough and keep that out with his smile and good look. But he can snap the neck of people without them trying to stop him. his family comes from money, buisness, money, power , it's in his gene, his blood. he like the challenge. as a teenager and even after in the show we see rory has trouble to see people,she only see the look and reputation and never look past this. she was afraid of him because he will have change her. she was kind, innocent, he will have challenged her. she live in a candy world, she was the princess of star hollow (and her mother will not like him because he will not agree with the relationship they have, lorelei living by rory and keeping her a little girl, a mini me), she can't date the bad boy, a boy who live more than a lot of man live in a life, sex , money, travelling, he had made all those things early in his life. in the future i see him becoming a leader, a ceo of a big multinational without the family money, it make him more than she wanted to see in him. and rory want to be the good girl but the truth is she often misjudged people. And passion and love can crash the things we thought, the life we want. we don't choose who we love. in story we often see him as a good man who do what rory want but she need the challenge and a man like him whatever the infatuation or love will not change for her. he is ambitious, he is tough, he can be cruel but he has also a heart. he need a woman who don't try to change him and accept his need for power, money. . continue it's good

have you heard the song "delicate" by damien rice? it reminds me of this story! take a look at the lyrics.

awwsome story

Pretty please update soon

Oh it's so fantastic. I can't wait for the next update.

xoxo,

Tryphyna

Good story so can't wait till you update it you are doing really good with it

god, it's so sad...

very well-written, you really convey what they are feeling...

update please! I'd love to see more! :)

Tristan/Rory dysfunctional relationship weird, but still good. I wonder how it all started though, gotta keep reading on.

Another great chapter. I love the way that you write the relationship between Tristan and Rory.

Carley-Marie : )

his dad sucks i love that he went to rory and told her that he needed her. i have much love for this story update soon

hey this story is great i like dark tristan him and rory are my fav gg pair update soon your work is great

i love this story very different keep it up

good chapter

Wow. Well done. I'm very excited that you updated this. I look forward to the next updates as well!