| Reviews for Some people Change |
|---|
  Sierra chapter 2 . 8/25/2013 Plz More |
| August Bloom chapter 2 . 7/13/2011 I like the story idea, but it's a little rushed. The first chapter left me wondering why Amy was suddenly all over him, and there were a couple of grammar mistakes. Amy is also very OOC(Out of Character.) But that's okay, if you need her to be for it to fit into the story plot. Please work on the grammar: After a period you always put a space, and you HAVE to use commas if you combine sentences or it's a run on. Please don't be offended, this is CC, not a flame. And I'm sorry if I'm harsh to you, this is my first time giving out CC. Once again, I love the idea, and the second chapter is really, really good! I'm just saying you can always improve. :) |
 DeathGoddesses chapter 2 . 7/4/2011 Great chapter. Please update soon I can't wait to read more. I have a feeling that Amy is going to spend a lot of time there. |
| bookgirl39 chapter 2 . 7/3/2011 Well the first chapter was... Well it was nice but I have seen better written plots. It's obvious that Amy is using him. She was just all over him "suddenly". The second chapter was better. Hmm... Ian and Amy are alone, Amy's dressed like a whore and Ian hasn't showed her his bedroom yet. After Max's comment in chapter one I'm suddenly curious on this out come. |
| Ana Virgnia chapter 2 . 7/3/2011 Fatastic, in chap 1 Amy was a little OOC but in chap 2 she became our Amy Bookworm... OK but be carefull with the Kisses OK? Dont g too fast! |
| DeathGoddesses chapter 1 . 6/27/2011 I love the story, please continue it. I can't wait to read more. It took me forever to find the story, since I couldn't remember the title. |
| GiveMeBackMyFreedomFandoms chapter 1 . 6/20/2011 Continue the story & dont u think u made Amy change a bit 2 much? Cause I REALLY dont think Amy would do anything that could get her a criminal record even if it is 4 her branch. & Ever? really? |
| dontknowwhy chapter 1 . 12/18/2010 go plz |
| SmurfsTasteGoodOnToast chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 To answer your question...KEEP GOING! KEEP GOING! KEEP GOING! KEEP GOING! Please... |
| BookNNNerd1218 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010 keep going definetly i love this story so interesting! amazing job BTW!~BookNNNerd |
| AmyisWonderful chapter 1 . 8/5/2010 Continue please do Continue! |
| hibean chapter 1 . 7/24/2010 keeep going! |
| FreakishlyMee chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 Great story. CONTINUE! |
| Queen Alexandera's Birdwing chapter 1 . 7/16/2010 Yes!PLZ do! |
| niccy924 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010 Keep going! :D |
