Reviews for I Keep Losing Everything About You
C.Elder chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
I like your stories, but I absolutely cannot stand the hapless,sappy,constantly drunk, selfish, etc etc logan that is in them. Can't you have V give him a good slap to snap him out of it once and for all?
nights of wonder chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
This is so great
c.elder chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
very good indeed- hope you do more.
coolhan08 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
Omgosh this fic is perfect! So spot-on and very in character for both Veronica. This is just absolutely perfect!
Ghostcat3000 chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
This dialogue is perfection. Totally noir in tone and fast, like it should be. Love it!
RedJane12 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This is so cute! Love the changes in POV from L to V and the slow changes in their relationship... Some very funny moments as well as very touching ones... You write both of them so well! Loved it.
HoneyBee1 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
This is really great. I hope you continue!
Nerdyesque chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Love the way this flows...wish there was more!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I absolutely loved that, just everything about it. Sorry there's no specifics it's the whole story really :)
LLLuYYY chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
it's beautiful.
phifeversham chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Great story! I like the alternating POVs.
LoVe.always.and.forever chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
I Love this !

So Beautiful.
Josielynn chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
This story is so great! The way you wrote their relationship and showed their feelings was amazing. I really liked the ending where he needed her to be more than there for the night and she gave him what he needed.