| Reviews for Yellow Maelstrom |
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  Guest chapter 13 . 7/21 like the story a lot but i am finding the chapters kinda short and because of that it feels incoinvienient as gets cut off mid-story. I like the story alot just wish the chapters carried through the entire part of a "mission/saga". |
 buterflypuss chapter 13 . 7/21 good chap |
| Shifter chapter 13 . 7/21 Great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/21 I like what you've started, but saying Naruto didn't use his clones because he thought it was cheating is a terrible plot point. Naruto is no longer an idiot and is going into a profession that could kill him. I would have just said that shadow clones lack truly abstract thought and thus are best used for information absorption and repetition training. Thus learning entirely new things and strengthening the body should be done without shadow clones. |
| Mlonki chapter 9 . 10/23/2019 meeh why does every author thin that if naruto is getting stronger so should his team such bullshit... |
| Silver chapter 14 . 9/3/2019 I really don't get how authors say things like "I wont let this story die" or"I'm not abandoning this" and then never update again |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/9/2018 Yes she gonna die she gonna die the day of my final amazing dream has arrived and it rhymes! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2018 No his brother gave him his sharingan before he died due to tobirama |
| Kingkong101 chapter 3 . 4/22/2018 Weak naruto |
| N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 14 . 4/16/2018 I actually just got to this page and highly like the story. I hope to see more. |
| Dracoessa chapter 2 . 2/9/2018 Hahahahahaha Hahahahahaha Hahahahahaha! |
| Bosma19 chapter 14 . 2/4/2018 Please update |
| YokaiAngel chapter 14 . 11/26/2017 g00d luck |
| Narutoashrs chapter 14 . 10/11/2017 Can u please update it with a new chapter... It was getting really interesting |
| pervysage1 chapter 14 . 7/7/2016 come on man keep going |
