No,not now. Neal has to get better. if it hurts progress in his recovery, he shouldn't know what's going on. Peter, you should have had a better plan when you knew what was at stake. the suspence is litterally killing me. amazing writing so far

off course Neal would pull a stunt like that. I'd expect nothing less, but I hope he isn't draining himself too much. him being this weak is heartbreaking reading, hell, I'd sort of like to enter the story myself to soothe him a little. And off course, that's impossible. i hope Neal recovers soon, I miss his mischvious behaviour. and he's in love with Violet, aaaawwww,how romantic, He deserves that. I hope he ends up with her, so they can help eachother 3 great story :-)

so incredibly loving and caring Elisabeth is. she really cares for Neal, just as Peter does. Not leaving him alone, is an act of love and care like none I've ever seen before. And it's keeping him safe. Awsome chapter.

Really love this story and are really really hoping for an update on your lovely story.

loved it well written

wow this is really good story.
someplace so beautiful that my fantasy balloons floated away in daydream world... at times so emotional to feel moisture in eyes.

truly beautiful and heart-warming story with moments of intensity. really good.

hope for a continue someday...

oh no, it's a cliffhanger and no more chapters to read...please update soon...got to know what's going to happen next...

Surely Mozzie isn't going to help Neal escape from the hospital in his weaken state?

I wish that something more pernament would happen to the one responsible for hurting Neal

You are doing a fantastic job with this being your first fan fiction story...keep it up

I hope you'll continue this story at some point! Would be a shame to leave this hanging. :)

You have a really interesting story here! I really hope you continue.

I know this is meant to be a review but I have just begun reading fan fiction and I really enjoyed this story have you completed it and I can't get to the end or is it just the twelve chapters here.

You have to update this story because it is amazing! I love White Collar and you just make my love for it grow even more with this story!

Excellent attention to detail! Love the description of the oxygen flow meter!