I love this story. So any love interest for Hibiki

Alright so far this seems...Awesome! Very well done to this point you do a good job of explaining what's going on to readers from either fandom without spending TOO much time on exposition, the fights scenes are very well written and easy to follow which is quite important, dialogue flows very smoothly and once again is easy to follow so far I love this story. I do have one bit of constructive criticism and I hope it's not taken the wrong way it's kind of a problem with anime fanfiction but you really don't need to slip in Japanese words into the dialogue just for the sake of doing so. This has really only started in the most recent chapter but well all the dialogue is in English for obvious reasons and sometimes you'll slip in words in Japanese seemingly just for the sake of having them and it breaks up the narrative and detracts from the story. My best example is when Hibiki answers the phone saying yes and then you have him saying hai for the rest of the sentence problem being he's saying the exact same word just in a different language and it doesn't make a lot of sense. It's kinda like... let me use a real-world example I'm half-Mexican I speak Spanish and it's like if I in the middle of a conversation with someone who didn't speak a word of the language started slipping in words in Spanish not because it wouldn't translate well otherwise (because some things are like that I will admit titles, attack names, even some honorifics I can accept leaving in which you didn't do for honorifics anyway though.) but just because I knew the words and wanted to use them so who cares about the person I'm talking to. And I can understand if you're happy about learning new words in Japanese so you want to slip them in to show to the reader or for the sake of practice but it can be very jarring for a reader and pull them out of the immersion you build so well in this story. So once again I hope you don't see this as an attack I'm merely trying to help with some constructive criticism on what is honestly a very good story that I cannot wait to read more of. I hope you have a great day night whatever it is when you see this and God Bless. Thank you for writing this.

yes this is how strong should a rider really be the tv show not doing them any justice since the way they make rider power look so weak compare to those character from manga like bleach

hola

how the hell was tatsuki able to lift a telephone pole?

i thought chad had the ridiculous strength in the series?

Please update

Very cool story! I must admit, I haven't watched Kamen Rider Hibiki (yet), but I figured I'd seen enough different Kamen Rider series that'd I'd be able to follow along. I really love how well you explain things about KR and integrate them with Bleach. Can't wait for your next update!

cool story like both shows

You updated! *glomp* Awesome chapter! My favorite parts were when Hibiki shouted at Tatsuki to put down the telephone pole (though how she got that in the training hall inside a building confuses me), Hibiki using the "Laughing Pressure Point" on Tatsuki (Kamen Rider Decade reference for the win!), and Ichigo training with his training Onsa (I squealed imagining his Oni form, it sounds so pretty and shiny! I wonder if his Oni form will be a sexy black and red like Zangetsu in his Bankai form when he gets his real Onsa?) I have a feeling Amaki will be very sympathetic with Ichigo when they find out that his mother was killed by a hollow. Anyways I hope you update again soon!

Please update this story more often I realty like it.

Not bad

This story is genius. I love it and please update it more.

this is really good man.

i think i could see Tatsuki having more of a role in the story now and maybe being with hibiki as a couple.

also i just noticed that i missed the part where orihime being a daydreamer that expresses it.

oh man i just saw the parakeet episodes and i just cannot wait to see what else you have for the rest of the series.

keep up the good work dude.

skinnydude911, signing out.

Aw, you're welcome! *hugs* Ha! I had a feeling it would be Tatsuki! You know, I just realised something, if Hibiki goes with the others to rescue Rukia, would TAKESHI forbid Hibiki from trying and Hibiki ignore that order? Or would it be one of those off the record missions where if Hibiki gets caught, they would deny all involvement and say Hibiki did it againest orders. And what would be TAKESHI's opinion on Hibiki recruiting Tatsuki and later on Ichigo? Personally I think they would be crazy to be anything but enthusiastic about having two new oni with potential as large as theirs and would bend over backwards to have them want to join the orginisation, especially with Ichigo.

Yay! New chapter! You know, I just noticed that Hibiki tends to treat Rukia like a sister with the way they argue and all.

Heck he treats kinda treats Ichigo like a brother too. I wonder if Ichigo and Rukia think of him as a brother by the time Renji and Byakuya show up? Anyways I'm also curious to know how far in the Bleach storyline you've gotten, since it was recently revealed that Aizen knew about Ichigo since the day he was born, (Aizen is such a creepy stalker)and manipulated events so that Ichigo would get stronger. Ichigo also finds out his dad is a Soul Reaper too. I found this stuff out at a site called One Manga.