| Reviews for Unforgivable |
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   KindledStar chapter 1 . 1/10/2016 its good i just dont understand whats going on?o.0 |
| symphknot chapter 1 . 3/13/2015 Is so fantastic |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2013 Wonderfull |
| kwityerbeliaken chapter 1 . 11/26/2012 This is way good! I love it, keep up the good work. :p |
| aangismyhomie chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 WOW. Excellent job! |
| Takethe Blanket chapter 1 . 4/7/2010 Thank you for writing this for me :) |
| GalleyTrot chapter 1 . 4/7/2010 Nice - It had me craving more, wanting to get deeper into their mindsets. The idea works well, though I have to say that the execution could have used a bit of tweaking. A little less vague over the emotions and smaller details, and this could potentially be a very powerful piece. |
