please continue this story. i want to see how it ends.

please update

Please update I’m loving your story!

Poor Sasuke he thinks Kohona is sane

I love the way the characters are developed and how they make smarter decisions due to their doujutsu boosting their teamwork. This story is well-written, so it pains me to know it's been many years since it's been updated. Still, I congratulate you on this masterpiece! :-)

Somehow, me writing "Fuck You" doesn't semm to fully convey my opinion on your story. You give naruto the sharingan, yet you make naruto's battle performance WORSE than canon. You gave Sakura a sharingan? You are a fucking idiot. The chakra demands would KILL HER you moron! Kakashi couldn't use it for long, and you gave one, to the genin with the smallest chakra reserves? You are an ass.

I like the story. I hope you do update this though. It's been some years since your last update. Hope you haven't completely abandoned it. I like the long chapters. It gets more out so the story can progress faster with fewer chapters so main points can be expressed especially one's that are already known when using some cannon material. Well anyway I do hope you update this story when you by change have time to look through it again. I know life takes priority over anything else especially when it's your life. All authors on this site go through it one time or another. Anyway that's quite enough rambling on. I hope you have a nice evening and day. Ja ne! :-)

Why did Naruto only give her one eye of he thought he was dying? The only reason Kakashi only took one was because they thought the other half of his face was crushed. You even had a plot device that let him regrow his eyes. I simply fail to see why Sakura couldn't have gotten a full set of eyes. Only having one eye is going to cause problems she, of all people, really didn't need.

I am loving this story! PLEASE, come back to it and update! The whole plot is just beautiful:)

Hmm, it's intriguing. Team seven... team sharingan...

Awesome love it

As the Uzumaki are relatives of the Senju, will Naruto develop the Rinnegan?

Two things look up the juts names it is a little disorienting to see them in the non standard format
Also some words don't carry the same meaning in English as they do in Japanese kyuubi being one example where it refers to a specific type of entity if you want the full thing it is kyuubi no kitsune I believe also sensei is a title in Japanese that carries a lot of respect where as teacher is a profession that does n other carry near the same respect

1) Sorry about that, pushed the wrond button when trying to fav/follow
2) THIS STORY IS AMAZING!
3) Please post the next chapter soon
4) This is really for ch 4

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