Cool little story, very well written.

This was a nice story... Must say l thought it would of had a little more...

Maybe l wanted more tourture or maybe a little more... But it was still a nice read... Must admit like the twist at the end... I just the story had so much potential...

Keep up the writing

You scared the shit out of me I thought you killed Lucas and for a minute I was like 'oh hell no you did not just kill my Lucas' but all is good and I'm glad you chose to end this on a happier tone. I loved your story so much!

Aww this was beautiful no shouting or nothing just a normal heart to heart conversation. I really hope he tells her how he feels soon I'm pretty sure she feels the same way. Nice chappie btw.

I knew something like this was gonna happen I mean you can't be happy forever but hopefully they clear all the misunderstandings. Oh and that's awesome that he loves her already now I'm just wondering if she feels the same way.

Wow so far I'm loving this story. Somehow I'm drawn to stories where Lucas is the arrigant bad boy who doesn't give a shit about others but then comes Brooke and everything changes. I can already see the changes that he's making for her although maybe he is just hosing his true self from her and Brooke is just making him reveal himself. Well anyways I'm gonna go ahead and read more.

OKAY, so i spent most of my time procrastinating homework and reading your story.

I, too, was about to smack upside the head.

I thought that you actually made Lucas die.

AND I FREAKING TEARED UP AND ALL.

But good thing you didn't

I loved your story by the way :]

THANK GOD YOU CHANGED YOUR MIND BECAUSE I WAS ABOUT TO GO OVER THE INTERNET AND SMACK YOUR INTERNET ASS IF YOU ENDED UP YOUR HISTORY LIKE IN THE FIRST PART OF YOUR CHAPTER.

NOW ONTO THE MERRY THINGS LOL LOL I LOVE THE FACT THAT IT WAS ALL A DREAM!. THAT THEY GOT MARRIED AND HAVE A BOY AND ALMOST A GIRL LOL LOL LOL .

IM SO HAPPY FOR THEM!

WHEN I READ THE NAME FOR THE BOY IT REMINDED ME TO THAT ACTOR CALLED CAM GIGANDET THAT WAS IN THE TWILIGHT FRANCHISE LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL.

YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB WRITTING THIS ONE.

ITS SO SAD THAT IT ENDED BUT LIKE YOU SAID ALL GOOD THINGS HAVE TO COME TO AN END AND I WAS GLAD THAT I COULD BE PART OF IT.

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE BL FROM YOU!

I really started crying during the middle and the tears were so bad that i missed the part of her waking up and got really confused! I'm so glad you didn't let Lucas die, i didn't think i'd have been able to cope! Great story though, love it!

I have to admit I was so pleased that you didn't end it with Lucas being gone! I'm such as sucker for a happy ending... so I am totally chuffed with the family fluffy ending!

You really did have me panicking when Brooke was using Lucas' name and talking about him in the past tense, like subtle little hints before you even mentioned Lucas being gone were genius! It was jut enough to make me pick up on something being not quite right, and then when she was talking to Cam and going over the flashbacks... it was heartbreaking! It was so sad when Brooke and Cam were laying flowers on the grave I was pouting like mad!

But thankfully it was all a dream! I was totally relieved when she woke up and wondered if it was all real or not and then she went downstairs and saw Lucas! I seriously loved how concerned he was when she was kind of shaken up and how he asked Cam to look after not only Brook but the baby as well! I honestly can't tell you have happy that made a sappy romantic like me!

I really loved the Brucas family unit you set up what with the cute son and unborn daughter! It was just perfect! And again you managed to keep the spark between Brooke and Lucas still burning even with their kids around! It did make me chuckle slighly when Cam interupted their make out session and asked them what they wee doing.

I seriously can't believe that this story has come to an end! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading every single chapter of this fic and seriously hope that this isn't the last story that you write as you realy are one of my favourte writers on fan fiction and the stories you come up with and the way you write the charactes is incredible! You should be like totally proud of this 'The Playboy and the Nobody' as its awesome!

So it would be a total crime for you to stop writing!

Anyway... I seriously hope to read more of your fics in future.

Rosie.

You sure know how to get the tears started. I swear I was about to start sobbing when I remembered at the top you said to read all the way through. Thanks for not killing him off for real. Loved the story!

Aww!

God you had me nervous and literally teary eyed for a second. I was like no! I mean its super sweet and adorable but sad because I want them together! However if you had chosen to end it that way it would have been awesome! Right when I was getting use to the idea of him being dead BAM there he is haha!

I really loved this story. From the little fights to the big blow ups, from all the tension to the finally caving in! It was all great and you wrote them wonderfully! I'm sad to see it end but like the chapter says 'all good things come to an end'

This Brucas was so sweet and I'm really going to miss them! I hope you continue writing because your writing and ideas are great and I seriously can't wait for more!

Great job girl and great ending!

Tay

GREAT CHAPTER, I REALLY LIKE IT A LOT.

I LOVE HOW LUCAS WAS ALL JEALOUS AND HOW HE TALKED COMMITMENT TO HER.

YOU GOT TO LOVE A GOOD ANGSTY/FLUFF BL!.

I LOVE THIS BRUCAS LIVING IN LUCASS HOUSE LOL LOL LOL LOL, THAT IS AMAZING!.

FOR ME YOU CAN WRITE 20 CHAPTERS MORE, BECAUSE I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY BUT I THINK A FAIR ENDING WOULD PROBABLY BE A CHAPTER IN THE FUTURE WHERE THEY SHOW THEM MARRIED WITH KIDS OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT.

YOU DID A GREAT JOB WRITTING THIS ONE.

PLEASE KEEP THE GOOD STUFF COMING

LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE

Firstly you should be made aware that when I saw you'd updated this I got ridiculously excited, I totally love this story and the update seriously didn't disappoint as both Lucas, Brooke and Brucas were on form!

I loved how misleading the first few lines were, Ihave to admit I worried I seriouly thought that Lucas was doing the dirty on Brooke! But then the director yelled cut and it became clear that Lucas was only filming a sex scene, that was a totally genius move! And then it got even better! Not only is Lucas being the perfect gent and boyfriend we get to see jealous Lucas! I genuinely couldn't help but smile at his reaction to seeing Brooke talking to this James guy, he was so adament that he was cool about it all but the way he constantly convinced himself of being fine with it totally showed he wasn't!

I also really loved how Brooke was totally no nonesense with him, when he was pouting and being jealous she stated very clearly what was happening and if he didn't like it then he'd have to lump it! And because of her attitude he's on grovelling form within the hour, which headed towards a nice little make out session that I have to say I thought was going to lead onto more - which was amazingly written as even though they were in the midst of a serious talk about their relationship you could still feel how much they want each other.

I had a goofy smile on my face all throuhg their serious talk about the future and love the fact that Lucas already has an engagemnet ready for when the time is right, and the talk about a baby was like heaven! Lucas was totally right, their child would have the best genes in the world! If only the Lucas on the show had been half as amazing as your Lucas then I think it would be safe to say One Tree Hill would have been so much better!

I can't believe that there might only be one more chapter after this that is so upsetting! I really cannot wait to read how it all ends... I seriously hope it'll be a happy one as the BL in this story are totally epic! Patiently (or not) waiting for the next update!

Anyway! I hope you had a cracking christmas and that your new years is a good one!

Rosie.

I was soooo happy to see you updated! I loved this chapter! It was so sweet and innocent (funny using innocent when it involves Brucas haha) Yet it was also sexy and passionate like always! The baby talk was so sweet! I'm glad Lucas has changed to be the person he is now! He is so amazing with Brooke and clearly nuts about her! I love he has a ring and love how jealous he gets over little things! Such a real Brucas thing! I can't wait for the new chapter and understand if its the last even though I'm going to miss this story. :(

I love this Brucas and how they have grown through the whole story! So you know whether you end or keep going I will be happy with whatever you do! Can't wait for the next update! Hope is soon and HAPPY NEW YEAR! :)