Haruka was so in character and I liked how you gave us an insight into her thoughts after having met Michiru.

Great story :)

Haha! pour Haruka, what ever shall she do. very good structure and progression of storyline. thanks for writing -Jesi Ki Kage

You write so beautifully, I really am in awe. Well done. Incredibly well done.

and where is the rest? :(

Nice

great job! Haruka is so pessimistic, so afraid she'd rather think she doesn't deserve happiness.

I like it!

I get the feeling you wrote this trying to convey the message of self loss, maybe loss of self identity. Is that we you were going for? Cause Haruka obviously denies her destiny, she doesn't accept her identity as a Senshi, she doesn't accept her feelings for Michiru, further deluding herself that Michiru can't be gay to further justify her denial. I don't know, maybe I'm reading too much into it. Tell Haruka to give me a call, I feel she's tittering on the cliff, debating with herself whether she should jump. She just needs a little shove, I can do that for her. Call me. I'll get her to come to her senses; declining Michiru's concert invitation, how rude...

The girl that Haruka flirted with & wanted a date gay for play.