omg its been two years pls update i can't this is perfect

Love this story and I'm not even a huge fan of Anders, at least not post Awakenings Anders. But I love how you've written his character!

Can't wait for an update. :D

Standing by.

This is by far one of your best stories. Anders is portrayed very well, and Surana is extremely interesting. It's nice to see a story with a warden where they aren't the main character.

This is my absolute favorite story here on and I really hope you'll continue with this one :) If other stories get more support, obviously you'll be choosing them instead - I hope that, whatever story is chosen, you have FUN writing it.

But yeah I love this story and 'tis amazing 3 (But yeah you are amazing period, and I love pretty much all of them. But out of all the ones I'd have to pick? This one.)

Yes, girl! Keep going! This is one of the best Surana/Anders fics out there, and you've set up the story so well that it would be a crime not to finish it.

I like the connection - if not actual friendship - between Anders and Surana - please give us more.

I just wanted to say that I really like your story so far :) Also, I thought up a possible escape method for Anders: maybe those giant spiders found their way in through a crack or hole or something in the storage area, and Anders volunteers-or gets drafted-to help Surana with another inventory-type task and takes advantage of the opportunity to escape that way :)

"Knight-Commander Greagoir, as was his custom, making the other templars look as redundant as the extra vowels in his name by the level of stony disapproval generated by his eyebrows alone"

Planning on reviewing when I get to chpt 10 but this sentence is just made of win XD

Another great chapter and one sorely needed. I love this story altho I do worry about why Anders dislikes Suri so much... Maybe he doth protest too much lol.

Anyway, next instalment tomorrow please.

Take care

Naomi xxx

You know my Surana would probably get on famously or infamously with your Anders. If she didn't scar him for life in the process... But the thoughts of those two working together gives me good ideas... To the trusty notepad!

I enjoy reading this immensely, Im looking forward to your next update.

This story is amazing! It's witty, cleverly written, and delightfully void of cliches. When I came across this story at just one chapter uploaded, I was profusely relieved to see that you separated your Surana from the billions of girl-next-door, Mary-sue stereotypes. You've also captured Anders's personality perfectly, which is a surprisingly hard feat for most. You've deviated away from the exact events of Dragon Age, which is wonderful way to attract readers, as the stories get overly repetitive and tedious. Because I am unable to create an FF account (for some reason or another), I have saved a list of URLs in a word document on my computer, which I use instead of "following" fiction with an account. Needless to say, your story is on there.

Fantastic job. I've been with you since the first chapter and would be delighted to see it through. You need not doubt the continuation of this novella. :)

I love love LOVE! this story! I love your Anders and Surana, their back and forth is priceless, and I love the build-up with their relationship. :) Shall eagerly await future updates! Keep up the great work, and thank you! ]

YES! Most definetely still interested in this story.

I really like this so far! Please continue!