Reviews for The flying thundergod, 2nd generation
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
keepupthegoodwork
danvo5 chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
it might be a good idea to speed up the pairing, but a good story idea so far!
I am Telgar chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
I bet when Shikamaru broke Temari heart. I bet Gaara had to do some fast talking. I mean if it was found out that the guy she was seeing was two-timing her. I bet that Suna would not be pleased by it and would want to brake that treaty with Konoha. So to keep Suna from braking away Gaara had Tsuande send Naruto to Suna. I bet they barter how long Naruto would be in Suna. Then at the end I bet that Gaara was willing to give Tsuande a bet. Gaara bet on his sister will make Naruto a man over Tsuande Konoha's kunoichis. I hope that Naruto helps Temari get rid of all that emotional baggage.

I can see it he takes her out to train. Then he lets her let go of her rage by killing off Shikamanu and Ino clones. Until she has exhausts her charka and rage. Maybe she almost kills him until she realizes that she almost kill him.
Angel Rei Ayanami chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
My friend this is one amazing story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work my friend.
troutman30 chapter 2 . 7/20/2010
I so love this pairing, of course you're not moving too fast either way, at least it's not complicated it's the kind of story that can be finished quickly or drawn out.
EroSlackerMicha chapter 2 . 7/19/2010
The weeks are going to pass to quickly. with him being future hokage...hmmm.

I still see a lot of pain in Shika's future.

Keep it up.

ESM
EroSlackerMicha chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
GIVE SHIKA A SAND ENEMA!

Nice start. (Shudder) Fan girls should be exterminated on sight with extreme prejudice.

Keep it up.

ESM
spriterx chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
Great story so far:)
Dark Insomniacs chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
Great story I hope you update soon NarutoxTemari is one of my favorite pairings.
EbonPurlight chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
lol love it keep it coming
Operiet chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
great fic! good Chapter! hurry and update!
fanficreader71 chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
Good Chapter, I will be looking foward to your next update
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
EbonPurlight chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Nice rounded story keep it coming as i like this pairing.
Bankaiover9000 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Temari and Naruto huh this could get intresting. Quite shock with Shikamaru cheating on her :0 hopefully Naruto can pick up the pieces. Great first chapter. Cant wait for the next update :)
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