Sorry to say but this is somewhat lame. It kept switching from Arisaka-sans p.o.v to Ageha-sans p.o.v. It was confusing because of no seperation between the p.o.v's. I felt like in between both Ageha-sans and Arisaka-sans p.o.v it was switching between characterS. I also felt I was in a daze while reading it. Plus some of the sceens weren't well explained. So overall it was confusing, not very well written and not very explanatory of the character this is not the best but definatly it is NOT the worst. So, with that information in mind you must keep writing. I want to see in you later fanfics how you've evolved from this. Even if this is not the best I know you can do better as you go along. Personally we (or at least I) just hope you had fun while writing.

Aww that was unbelievable cute! *_* I love the YukariXAgeha pairing its so cute and funny again

LOL SO SWEET! THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE OF THIS ON FF!

d'aww the story was cute xDD LAWL I'd be exactly like Kuromine over there, snickering, xDD

Actually it's not lame at all. I love it!

You can write better than me.

I already made a fanfic called Rose Petals for V.B. Rose too.

If you read it I hope you'll like it. And I want to read more of your V.B. Rose fanfics because they're r so awesome!