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![]() ![]() ![]() please finish this. im obsessed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SERIOUSLY! THAT'S WHERE YOU DISAPPEAR AND NEVER COME BACK?! IN THE MIDDLE OF ACTION SCENE. REALLY?! Now on to other things, the sudden inclusion of Julian into the story was kind of pointless despite the fact that I generally like his character. Suddenly having him back and living with them makes Brooke come across as selfish and inconsiderate toward Tammy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish this story it is soooo good! I want to know what has hAppened to brooke and alex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! This story is beyond amazing-I love it! You're such a talented writer and writ Brooke and Sam's mother and daughter dynamic so well!? Please please write more for this story and 1000 others for Sam and Brooke, lol. Again, amazing job! :) Lots of Luv, Ryrissa1993 (Hope) |
![]() ![]() i think tammy let her wall down way too easily. i love this story. but thats the only issue i have with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just found this story really really hope you finish it because it is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this fan fic ! Please update soon 3 xxxxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read all of this! Please update soon, this is fab :) |
![]() ![]() great plot! Can't wait for the next chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this story and the dynamic of Sam being a big sister. Hope you update soon x |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no! brooke and alex both shot! i hope they live, but if one has to die it better not be brooke! no offense to alex lol. i wonder if the little girl with jacob will enter the baker family... hmmm cant wait to read more UDS :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! Did not see any of that coming! update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I liked it. Definitely good drama. Would love to see a little more of Brooke's feelings in the next chapters cause she's shot. Maybe it's really hard for her walking or something like that and the girls have to help her a lot. That would be awesome! Update sooN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope sam finds that creep! update soon! :) |