This is like, my 3rd time reading this short story. I love it to pieces! Every detail is so great. I wish more people would write stories that centered on Mamoru's school life. It would be much more interesting than the other stuff that's been out.

I think you did an excellent job with Asanuma's portrayal and I loved finding out about Mamoru through his eyes. I really enjoyed the slight reference to Usagi. Lovely story! _

Holy frick. You are amazing. You captured Asanuma's character PERFECTLY! I adore Asanuma and I am SOO disappointed that he's not in the anime. He's such an amazing character.

There are just a couple teeny tiny things that bugged me. Personally, I HATE it when people use random Japanese in fics. People's names are fine, terms of endearment (chan, san, sempai, etc), places, food but things like gomen. It just irks me. Also, you romanized "ohaiyo" wrong. If you write it using the Latin alphabet, it would be spelled ohayou. Just thought I would let you know.

Other than that, PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT! There aren't enough fics involving Asanuma. I thought I would see if there were some and with Sailor Moon as the category and "Asanuma" in the search engine, yours was the only one that came up.

I loved it! It was something different from the lovey dovey stories... something that focused purely on the complex character that is Mamoru,... theres not enough of this stuff! Hope you write more! you've got quite a talent

Cheers!

At first I thought this was from a girls pov. It's nice to get a guy's pov.

I also appreciate your explanations at the end about the Asia school culture. It really does help with understanding.

Great story.

Wonderful! A fic about Mamoru *love*, but seen through Asanuma's eyes (one of the MOST UNDERESTIMATED CHARCTERS EVER in SM's world)... Excellent work on both. Bravo!

Brilliant. Thats what only comes to my mind after reading this. Sorry I cant add more.

this is my favorite story of all time. it's well writen,original and everything a story should be. i have gone back and re-read it at least 5 time (i'm a freak i know lol) anyway if u read this review maybe u could write somthing similar involving mamoru's school and intriduce more characters. i don't know. u're the writer. i suck at this stuff. but if u do i'll be looking foreward to it.

That was so nice. I love Mamoru.

This was a nice story. I've been curious as to who Asanuma Itto is and I think you did a good job writing him in the first person, demostrating to the readers how much of a fan he is of Chiba-sempai. I feel inspired to go find the fourth volume of the Sailormoon Manga now...

Love it! Very original style of storytelling. You really bring out both characters through this.

Wow! this is sooo sweat. I found that it describes Mamoru they way I had pictured him to be. I am so glade that I read it, I was dying to find original work like this one.

P.S.

I really engoy your work/writting.

wow!Thanks for telling me about this story!It was amazing and had so much depth! It showed Mamoru from a whole new point of view, I'm this really made up for your long absence in fanfiction writing. -

Good story. By the way when are you going to update "The Golden Crystal?" I am a Mamoru fan just like you and I love this story and I've been waiting forever for you to update it. Anyway, write more romantic Mamoru stories, but be sure to pair him only with Usagi because I am also a big fan of this coupling.

That was a such a beautiful and cute story! *big smiles with dimples* Keep writing! _~