Holy crap. That was absolutely brilliant. It was haunting, descriptive, and powerful. I love it.

Great little story that needed to be written, I thought the dream sequences worked well.

You have a good story here; it's well-written and compelling, and examines the intricacies of the whole situation in a way that the show couldn't.

I especially like the little touches here: Angel becoming Warren when he loses his wings, Logan's sudden realization of just what Warren's lost, the cyanide as anesthetic, etc...

Good job so far; please keep going.