Damn :0

Oh my god, update soooon. I LOVE THIS! Wow, I've been reading ProtonxLyra for over a hour now, but it's so addicting that I think I'm getting addicted to the ship!

~Sky~

:)

I love this pairing, but MAN does Proton come across as creepy XD. Still gotta love him, though. I love the way you portray him. Conniving, obsessive and somewhat mentally unstable. Unreliable narrators are the best!

And I'm glad that you made Lyra 13, because, seriously, who in their right mind would let a 10 year-old run around like that? And that way, her and Proton can get together no problem (given a few years, haha).

Oh, and I LOVED how you did that last line. I thought he was going to drop down from my ceiling and shank me or something. Oy... Either way, thanks for sending a shiver down my spine!

it was great you should write more love how he wants her keep up the good work.

~bye~

Write a sequel!

Now please? :3

Wow, I can not tell you how glad I am to have come across this wonderful story. Proton and Lyra is one of my favorite pairings to tell you the truth. Do you have anymore planned in the near future? Great work once again.

You should so write a sequal to this or something, it's awesome!

Delicious. I snapped that up like cotton candy and now I only want more.

The story is okay but it seems incomplete. I think it would be better if you added more chapters to this story.

Hello again.

I was wondering if you were going to make a sequel to this or not. It really is an awesome story. It doesn't seem finished though. So I really hope you plan on making a sequel to this showing us how Lyra gives Proton a chance. :)

That would be really sweet. And touching. :D

I just had to sign in and review! My computer is down, and right now I'm on a friend's labtop, but I still need to tell you how lovely this is. Proton's personality is great, the way he thinks about his life in Team Rocket and Lyra.

This is also very good as a sort of one-sided thing with him. And I loved the part with Silver. XD lawl. It seems you're getting better and better every time you right, even when I think there is no room for improvement.

By the by, do you know the remix by Blowsight? That's the version I had in my head, and I think it fits very well. Wonderful work!

Cool but it seems unfinished. You should write a second chapter or sequel to tell us how he and Lyra get together. Showing us how she feels for him and if he's really using her for his own personal use or if now he is falling in love with her.

Nice story. Hurry and post the next chapter.

Nice one, I like it! I kind of like this pairing

go Proton/Lyra...can u make a sequel? if is not much to ask !*giggles*

You have no idea how happy you've made me! 8D

I've been searching high and low for a Proton/Lyra romance fic and you have made me truly happy! I love how you portray Proton in his lust for Lyra. Gives us a good sense of what his true intentions are. Excellent, most excellent. :)

BUT! Pretty please, with sugar colored rainbows on top, write a sequel? Where Lyra actually gives Proton a chance and they get together and... ya know... having him realize afterward that he truly loves her (and that she loves him too). Oh pretty please! That would really make my day.

Again, THANK YOU for writing about these two! And thank you for writing the sequel!...? XD