The story is very interesting and I like how you portray Harry Potter. A suggestion for Harry's noble phantom is him summoning Hogwarts itself into the world with everything and people included like how Alexander summons his army, after all Hogwarts IS Harry potters legend.

It was magnificent, I love the premise.
Thank you, It was a beautiful but sadly short ride

too bad this is dead, great idea and lot of potential, wasted

Well, this proved to be quite the curious read. Surprising for me as I really, really, reeeaaally don’t like canon Harry - but you made this tale enjoyable in spite of that. I think a lot of my fondness for these short 10 chapters stems from the premise itself. Harry being a fictional character given life allowed for a ton of uncommon yet interesting interactions and scenarios. In regards to that I don’t think the personality of the fictional character given life mattered to me as much as the baseline of “a fictional character given life.”
Your Harry was older, more capable, and possessed the raw abilities of a Servant but he still felt like Harry Potter from canon. Even though I’m not fond of said character I have to extend accolades to you for nailing the voice of the character.
Though, I’m not sold on the idea that that voice was actually right for the character... With the explanation that “Harry” was the embodied essence of the Harry Potter book series I don’t think it’s fair for “Harry” to be a 1:1 reflection of the character. Yes the books followed Harry and told his story, but he wasn’t the sole aspect of that series. I think it would’ve been really cool if “Harry” had resembled and behaved as Harry on the surface level - but there were actually a large amount of subtle differences to who he was that allowed him to encapsulate the full essence of the characters and themes present in the books. (Of course I’m only harping on this as I’m not a fan of canon Harry. I imagine that anyone fond of the character would disagree with my thoughts but such is the nature of criticism.)
All in all though, it was a pleasant read. After eight years without an update I’m not about to hold my breath waiting for its continuation, but I’ll keep my eye on the work all the same. Thanks for the story, cheers, mate.

I am sadden by the end of this...
Could I continue it?

what's Rin's deal?

well, King Arthur needs his Merlin, after all :D

Well, I guess that's all the chapters. I'd be interested to read more, despite how horny that got in some bits. F/SN Harry Potter is a weirdly good combo

You hooked me the very moment you put Harry Potter in Sasaki Kojirou's place, and whatever happens from now on (I have only read chapter 1 as of now), I just want you to know: that was a stroke of genius

Hmmm... You have admirers Tohsaka.

Oh Harry...

It would be nice if you could come back to this story and complete it even if takes you months to write a single chapter is better then ending with a cliffhanger.

The fact you made Harry the embodiment of Harry Potter books is great. It pretty much means he has access to everything present in the world and what about fanfiction? So many different versions of him from which he can extract power...he could possibly become a god-like being if he knows what to do.

Well this is gone be interesting to say the least. It would be really nice to see Harry become Ilya's servant. I am cheering for her to kill Caster as soon as possible.

Hm shame you gave up on this.

So Harry's the embodiment of hus entire franchise then? Careful with that, you just introduced the possibility of TimeTurners being used..