You lost me when you made them lie like teenagers about sneaking off to be alone. At 21 you don't lie about staying with a girlfriend. People aren't that immature.

Absolutely love, love, love this story! I just read it straight through and have fallen in love with Caleb, I want to steal him away. Love that Embry and Leah are together, first naturally and then with the certainty of the imprint. Thank you for the start of a happy ending for Jacob and Bella. They suffered so much from the manipulations of others, it's great to see they are back together and will be a family. Love it. Thank you for finishing and giving us the ending we all wished for.

Loved it thanks for sharing.

Hola, me acaba de encontrar tu historia y me encanta, llevo 8 capítulos y ya me atrapaste. De que país eres? Me encanta que escribas de Jake y Bella, un año de amnesia es bastante. Hasta el momento no cambiaría nada y sobre la pregunta que hiciste un hombre se acuesta con alguien solo x sexo, aunque no estén enamorados porque ellos dicen que necesitan suplir sus necesidades, puras patrañas. Seguiré opinando según avance en la lectura, espero que nos vuelvas a deleitar con otro escrito de esta hermosa pareja.

This was very good. You should be so pleased with the accomplishment of finishing your story despite so many of life’s interruptions. You should be pleased with the readers who waited and cheered when a new chapter posted. I mean this, be pleased for honoring your commitment to finish.

It was a great story. Jacob as Alpha was excellent. Bella choosing to stand on her own was very good. Bella saying goodbye to Edward when he continued to plead how much he loved her was very good. She was choosing to live for herself and not as a vampire eternally 18.

My heart broke for Jacob more than once. He lost Bella but he never wavered from how much he loved her. She was always the only woman he ever really wanted. I loved Leah and her reasonableness and her strong emotions. I loved the camaraderie of Seth and Quil and Embry. I liked Embry with Leah, they made a good team.

I liked Aliyah for her bravery as a wolf and I felt bad for her when Jacob was never going to want more of a relationship. I stopped feeling bad when she claimed the baby was his and faked an imprint. She paid for it though, she lived a year in misery with him knowing he still loved Bella and was never going to love her. I wanted to shake Jacob when she told him she was pregnant. I didn’t think they had been together that recently. Do the math on it Jacob! And I couldn’t understand why he was forced into the marriage when he hadn’t imprinted. She did (supposedly), wasn’t it still his choice to accept it? That admittedly did confuse me.

Imprinting and the discussions of it was interesting. I did think Aliyah was a fraud though. I was pleased with Embry and Leah.

Billy and Charlie were great as loving, thoughtful and very often stressed out dads. Sam and his Pack lost their way and needed to be disciplined but I was surprised at stripping the wolf. The entire Council lost its way! Manipulative and dishonest is no way to run a tribe or city or people.

Little Caleb was adorable and my heart broke again for Jacob meeting him when his son was already a year old or older. Meeting him, knowing what he had missed out on, and not being able to hold him until Bella felt like it. Heartbreaking. Jacob never gave up, and you concluded with them on the path to their happy ever after. Thanks for that final chapter. It gave us hope. That’s why we read fanfic, we believe in this relationship and the life Jacob and Bella were meant to have together. Thanks for persevering when real life hurt and when reviewers were too sharp with their perspective. It was never directed at you. We had strong reactions to certain characters or certain twists in the story. Thank you again, best wishes in your new writing.

Did Jacob ever give the ring to Aliya?

IM SO INCREDIBLY HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I think I was one who pestered you for the past 10 years. I’m glad to hear you are doing well. Best of luck in your future adventures

Apology accepted lol but really thank for finishing it the end was AMAZING a lil rush but hey it was still awesome lol

I've wondered for years if this story had a HEA. I just found it again and hooray, it did! You've made my day.

I loved this story, thank you for sharing it with us.

Wow. She is very forgiving.

One of the BEST stories I have read! I loved it! Great job on the story and writing. :)

what a happy ending
loved it
are you still writing another Jake Bells story

Ahh that was perfect. I have to admit that I too read your whole store over again just to refresh my memory a little bit but it all was coming back to me as I went on. It's been so long since I've read any J/B fanfics that I've missed the satisfaction of a great J/B ending, especially after all the angst and drama. I can imagine how hard it must have been to finish this after so long. So thank you thank you thank you for finishing this story. This is definitely one of my most favorites! :)

Daphne you did such a great job! Ended it perfectly. Thank you for finishing it.