Wow. :(

Very interesting concept. This is wonderful and intruiging storyline you got here. I really hope you do continue this~

An atmospheric beginning and sets the stage for both a mystery and a romance. Not a cookie-cutter piece, either. Pity that it appears abandoned after one chapter. People spend all their time on their facebook profiles these days. Sigh. I don't have one. Never will. Facebook - ugh!

Please continue, don't stop now! :D I'm no expert in commenting a story but I know what you're writing is totally awesome :D and totally looking forward for the next chap!

This is soo cool, and very tense. I do hope you'll coninue this.

love the story so far, please keep at it, i'm curious to see where you go with it :)

Please continue this! I'm terribly anxious as to what happens next!

Wow, the story so far is really good It's also very well written and the characters are written very well. I hope you decide to continue the story, it would be sad to leave it unfinished when it's such a good story -

I loved it! Please update soon, I really dont know how the plot will progress but im sure it will be quite interesting! If you dont update i shall slice you into bits with my cards-love,skiggle

Oh, I do hope you continue this! It's an interesting continuation of the story, and very well written! :)

This is excellent! Very well written, too! I love ChesireXAlice and I can't wait to see how this story turns out! 3