| Reviews for Beach Day |
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TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012 No wonder men are so confusing. . Ten bucks Yugi's relieved it's not a psychological disorder (and that he thinks it cool *points to all the vampire books he owns*). brittney |
Anne1313 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010 [snigger] and I suppose it never crossed him mind to give Mokuba a call to ask what the heck? and he could have just run away when Yugi told him about the beach and not come back for a week and maybe just tell Yugi the truth? gosh this is funny though. I absolutly love it you rock I laughed till I cried when I found out the Vampire was Mokuba! and the bronzer [giggles] this is actualy really well writen as well you rock |
kblvs2read chapter 1 . 8/5/2010 Great story! Absolutely hilarious, but i wish we could've gotten more at the end... That Mokuba turned Yami was great! Lol Seto must be even more oblivious than Yugi! I also love how Yami researched and expiramented with his new 'condition' XD Pat yourself on the back for this kick-butt fic! |
thechiifactor chapter 1 . 7/1/2010 Are you kidding? That cant be the end! That is totally unfair putting a cliffy on a one-shot DX this is so not super special awesome :/ |
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 Very funny and cute. Poor Atemu. |
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 Wow chi! that was awesome! I'm loving all the unique ways everyone looks at the vampires! but a psychological disorder? that i never saw coming~ this was hysterical..i was so disappointed we didn't get a full lemon, but i find it ironic how yami's been kicked out by the gods and he doesn't care! awesome one-shot! |
MzNightmare13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 Nice one-shot! I'm surprised Atemu was able to hide it for so long and it was a little weird that Mokuba changed him. I could seriously see Atemu using bronzer to keep his tan. |
spirithorse chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 Oh poor Atem. But I love the paranoid and the humor that you put into this. And Yugi is clueless the entire time. O.o I didn't expect the Mokuba part...but it was such a good twist. *curses Mokuba* How did Seto not notice that? |