Reviews for Beach Day
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
No wonder men are so confusing. .

Ten bucks Yugi's relieved it's not a psychological disorder (and that he thinks it cool *points to all the vampire books he owns*).

brittney
Anne1313 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
[snigger]

and I suppose it never crossed him mind to give Mokuba a call to ask what the heck?

and he could have just run away when Yugi told him about the beach and not come back for a week

and maybe just tell Yugi the truth?

gosh this is funny though.

I absolutly love it

you rock

I laughed till I cried when I found out the Vampire was Mokuba!

and the bronzer [giggles]

this is actualy really well writen as well

you rock
kblvs2read chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Great story! Absolutely hilarious, but i wish we could've gotten more at the end...

That Mokuba turned Yami was great! Lol Seto must be even more oblivious than Yugi! I also love how Yami researched and expiramented with his new 'condition' XD

Pat yourself on the back for this kick-butt fic!
thechiifactor chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Are you kidding? That cant be the end! That is totally unfair putting a cliffy on a one-shot DX this is so not super special awesome :/
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Very funny and cute. Poor Atemu.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Wow chi! that was awesome! I'm loving all the unique ways everyone looks at the vampires! but a psychological disorder? that i never saw coming~ this was hysterical..i was so disappointed we didn't get a full lemon, but i find it ironic how yami's been kicked out by the gods and he doesn't care! awesome one-shot!
MzNightmare13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Nice one-shot! I'm surprised Atemu was able to hide it for so long and it was a little weird that Mokuba changed him. I could seriously see Atemu using bronzer to keep his tan.
spirithorse chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Oh poor Atem. But I love the paranoid and the humor that you put into this. And Yugi is clueless the entire time.

O.o I didn't expect the Mokuba part...but it was such a good twist. *curses Mokuba* How did Seto not notice that?