Wow this was awesome! I really loved reading this!
And i really like your writing style! Great job! And you didn‘t go too far. It was perfect

Not too much at all, I have read worse (Kyle in chains)
This was awesome and please write more of this

This...is amazingly well written. Like, holy shit I can only wish that one day I can contribute to Fandoms in the same way this did (for me).
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It was... wonderful... I really did love it. I’m a bit embarrassed to admit that this story made me cum without touching... like, seriously. I’ve never read any of your other stories so I don’t know how different this is but seriously wtf. I entered this story a child and left a kinky, dirty, literally trembling right now adult. You’re awesome, keep up the good work!

Lmao imagine just looking out your window to see two kids fucking on the sidewalk

That was horny

This is beautiful friend- you should honestly make it a book!

It’s AMAZING!

Dudeee that was hot as f**k! XD ;) I know it's years later now but that was AMAZING for your first smut. Almost all of it was hot (by varying degrees) and despite being long it continued to do so. The dirty talk was hot, the sadism, etc. All that kinky stuff. It was all so great! And I absouletley LOVED the way you portrayed them. You showed how Kyle could be a bit domainant back whilst still being submissive and all that jazz. And Cartman was controlling and kinky, demanding and yet still somewhat caring. So hot during sex but I loved how he was also caring afterwards and before. He's pratical when it comes to the injury and takes care of Ky. It was just so fucking sweet. :33 Doesn't care my ass!
I loved the way he so easily carries Ky and supports him. It's just soooo sweet omg!
Also don't get me started on that sinful shit. Mentioning bananas and pee. Things Ky hates? He's getting him disgusted and scared oml XDD Imagine that happening in a future instalment of this tho ommggggg. Also the cup thing? It's both so disturbing and wtf but also a bit hot to think about (aka like biting is hot to think about despite it hurting). Also Ky being a screamer :):):):)
Yeah don't mind me ;
Revel in the sin you've created because it's top nouche stuff.
Keep up the awesome work! XD

Yep. You made the Kyman fan in me very happy. Lol XD

JFC BEST KYMAN LEMON EVA

Wow. That was intense, fam. But good. And honestly Cartman is such a sweetheart for caring about Kyle's leg. Great story, yo.

I'm shook o (0‿0)

That was really good though.

It was perfect

Holy shit that was hot! I think you have singlehandedly turned me on to this pairing, first one I read and I'm in love! ️