really sweet, loved it! please write more scorose!

I like it - a lot! Thanks for sharing!

I think this is really sweet. I like that you didn't make Scorpious a jackass or a loser. You made him much more real because of that, and it was really sweet to read even with the sexual stuff that normally takes away from the sweetness.

This is your first scorose story? No way, it's amazing! I loved it, it was really sweet with just the right amount of sexy (: fabulous job, keep writing! :)

Amazing. Fabulous! Love this story! I really liked the way you wrote it, from Scorpius' POV and wih his thoughts... I loved it!

I in fact hadn't figured out those were scorps thoughts I thought they were song lyrics. Anyway now that I know... Well I know lol

anyway, great story. I loved that line (i am reading on my cell so I can go back and copy it) but he says something like wordlessly worshipping her. Omg I loved it!

:]] for your first scorose this was terrific.

'Merlin, he would die right now, if Heaven was this. If Heaven was her.'

And that right there is my very own kind of Heaven- it just described how he felt about her so perfectly

I lovelovelove the syle of this- it's stunning :) The characterisation was so VIVID and I could just SEE it right there, playing out like a movie in my head.

Well done for some truly inspiring writing!

I really, really liked this - it was beautifully written, almost lyrical. I loved the insight into Scorpius's head. Thanks for posting!

oh my GOSH. that was breathtakingly BRILLIANT. holy CRAP.

i am actually speechless, you captured everything so freaking perfectly and beautifully and stunningly and insert adjective here-ingly. i don't know what to write, that was beautiful.

oh and the briny sea and the girl and the fact that colours DIDNT bloom behind his eyes because cliches aren't for this couple and you worked the magic into your words and you could taste the texture and the sand and the sea air!

wow. that was completely incredible. i am flabbergasted.

"This is so new, so incredible. And his hands don't feel like his own anymore, they trail uncertainly, possessively across her cheek, down her neck. She sighs, a whisper in the sea-soaked briny air, and leans into his touch like she belongs there. Her eyes flutter shut. He uses the opportunity to drink in the spectacle of her flushed, beautiful face, her kiss-swollen lips, her pale skin offset by the tinge of a blush on her cheeks. To memorise this moment." - PERFECTION.

so many more moments but if i showed you all my favourites your entire story would be copied and pasted into this review box.

BRILLIANT BRILLIANT WORK.

xoxo
q.n.

Oh my god, this was amazing! It was so sweet and so beautifully written. One of the best ScoRose's I've seen in a long time.

I loved it! I would suggest making it a NON-oneshot and adding chapters, as this was posted just a few days ago... But I don't see how someone could come up with a different ending to THAT! (if you didn't get it, that was a completment ,I'm weird with that kind of stuff)

isn't this ment to be m rated with the amount of mature content in this? good writing style though

HOLY. MOTHER. OF GOD.

*nosebleed*

*cries*

That was...way, way, way more moving than I expected it to be. o_o

Nicely done... I like Scorpius reactions in this.

I like it. In fact, I'm adding it to my c2.

Much love!