This is really really good!
The way you ended it is adorable!
I love how she finally stood up for herself towards Inuyasha as well!

Oh tan lindo como siempre. No me canso de leerlo.

Muy caliente y linda. Como me gusta esta pareja dios. Disfruto mucho cuando encuentro historias de estos dos. Felicidades.

mhhh, very hot!

I loved it. From beginning to end. _ Way to go! WOOF!

Damn that was the hottest thing ever! WOW DAMN!

Me likey A-LOT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ NEXT CHAPTER! Damn that was HOT!

This story was great and I enjoyed it!

fun to read

This was a very interesting piece of smut. You did a nice job with it overall and the citrus was quite enjoyable. However there were quite a bit of lengthy verbatim flashbacks that weren't necessary. They didn't really add anything but lenghter for the most part. Other than that you did a wonderful job.

Loved it...

Oh my, my, my, I loved this story it was short and sweet and I liked it! I can't wait to read more of your stories! You're a wonderful writer and I will be combing through and reading your other stories! This story was and is really good and I'm glad I got to read it. You're a wonderful writer and this story was ausome and I can't wait to read your other stories!

Your friend
~Elizabeth

:( it shud be longer! Plz add more chapters!

I love this story and not just for the good smut scenes, I wish you would continue it though, I would love to read more!

nice keep it up