| Reviews for Fire of betrayal |
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DeletedAccount3498 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Wow. This was way awesome! I felt so sorry for Narcissa while I was reading this though. I wonder what would happen if she were to find out? Can you write another drabble/short fic based on that please? |
Jacalyn Hyde chapter 1 . 4/10/2010 You really don't like Bellatrix/Lucius? It's one I tolerate, maybe I like it a little bit if it didn't get in the way of possible Bellamort or Belladolphus. But you've read Bella, Love... you know I actually like these two, but not romantically, just together, for the very reasons you mentioned here: desperation for a brief escape and all the things they share. It is an interesting argument that being related might cause more OR less damage to their family emotionally if they were discovered. I honestly don't know, I mean it involves less people that way, but a closer group... I love that Rodolphus isn't even part of the equation. like Narcissa is because she is the relative they share closest and the one they care about most- more than each other anyway. Well done. I like it, quite a lot, actually. |
AngelofDarkness1605 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010 I don't like this pairing at all but in this fic, it suddenly seemed to make sense to me and I found myself really enjoying your drabble. Thanks for sharing! |
Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 4/3/2010 I like how you emphasize how normal their cheating is, because I bet neither of them is very happy about being "common"! As always, love the last sentence. |
Victory87 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010 Very good fic likez the ship :P |
Xx starlight-moon xX chapter 1 . 4/3/2010 Lol. Oh, you know how I hate Bella / Lucius . . . But anyway. "Stolen kisses" actually made me giggle, it seemed almost sweet . . . it turns something so horrible into a sort of travesty. I did like the line about them sharing the shadows of Azkaban, and when they wondered if it would cause more or less hurt as they're both hurting the same person. But, you know my feelings on Lucitrix. *rolls eyes at ship* Nice work, Az! :) |