I've always found photo albums stories cute, especially when it's one of my favorite pairings. Adorable scenario! This was an instant favorite for me. I believe I'll have to snoop through your other fanfictions sometime to see if you have anything as good as this. Haha! Great job! Hope to find more amazing short fictions like this one. It inspired me to write my own. Kudos!

With Love - Lil' Hermy Own Ninny

Hey, here's my comments/scores for the Tournament! (:

First of all, I'm not a Remus/Tonks fan- I'm much more a Remus/Sirius fan. I liked your story regardless, but this line made up for any bad feelings: There were too many pages of the four of them. And a few too many of Remus and Sirius for her liking… she knew about that though. It was a long time ago.

Haha. Anyway. I liked the idea of showing a life in pictures and newspaper clippings- it was creative and I liked the switch to Teddy at the end. It wasn't overly imaginative or original, but it flowed very well (I like how it went past-present-future) and the plot was captivating.

75/90- Nice job! (:

Hello! I will be telling you how I judged your story, and ensure you that the Tournament, is not actually dead )

To start off, I really liked the photo album idea. It might not have been the most imaginative idea, but you wrote it well and it was quite well written. I enjoyed that the plot line built on many relationships in Remus' life. I think that you put a lot of independent work into your piece, and you didn't seem to rely on your beta, which was really refreshing.

I think you could have been imaginative, and in my case, that's where you lost points. However, your skills made up for it this time :)

I gave you 72/90 - Well done!

AWW that was cute...and sad (

Aw! I am amazed you can still think up new one-shots to do! Love you, love this story :D 3

Lovely job of handling the challenge. Remus and Tonks were so tragic before DH, after, it's almost too hard to read about them. They shouldn't have been killed off.

I really enjoyed Tonks' sense of sneaky discovery in this. It's just what she would do and feel when she's snooping.

"There was a small photo of a family. Remus slept, a tiny pink baby in his new parents' arms. It was captioned April 10, 1960. The day he was born." - AW! I bet he was THE cutest little newborn you ever laid eyes on!

"and then with harry. He was a cute baby too, although a bit pudgier then Remus had been. She grinned at that thought." - "and then with Harry. He was a cute baby too, although a bit pudgier than Remus had been."

Aww fantastic i loved it the ending was soo sad im still in denial though to me those two never did die lol :)

This was a very sweet story. I love how you had Teddy come in to do the same thing as Tonks. I still hate the Lupins died. Nice job, good response to the tournament. Good luck!

Aww - the last part was so beautiful with Teddy - it made me cry :'-)

It's a really moving fic. I loved it, it was really easy to read. It's a great job! Good luck with the tournament!

wow.

"The rest of the album was filled with pages and pages of photos of him growing up. Playing on swings, riding a tricycle, eating, finger painting, on holiday with his parents." -that sentence and some things around it almost made me spilled some tears.. but the ending, it's just.. I cried.. and I got goosebumps all over me :P

I like how you describe things and I love how your write.. plus, it's always a pleasure to read about Tonks and Remus :)

bless Teddy Lupin..

Omg.. Wonderful story. The end was bittersweet. :[ I love how Teddy did the same thing that his mother did before him. 3