That was amazing! Write more!

That was everything I wanted from a Zelos/Lloyd fic. It was serious, IC and reminded me why I consider this paring so plausible. Thank you for this quality fic. 3

~I don't review fics anymore, so I'm sorry about my lack of detail.

Loved it! It's been some time since I found a story that was written this well. The story was a little too "fluffy" (not sure if that word is used any more)for me, but u give me hope that there are people out there who want to learn to write.

Here are some things I wanted to bring up tho:1)Where are they? I couldn't really get into the story without a destination. You could have put in one sentence and it would have lasted me. 2)add more movement. It helps put a persons imagination to work. 3)great touch with not making them kiss at the end. I was so scared you would put it in somewhere.

Aw Lloyd is pretty good looking through Zelos

You totally need to be writing more of these. Seriously. There are way too many bad Zelos and Lloyd fics out there.

I can really see this. Lloyd's such a great speech giver. He really seems like the perfect person to have as a friend when you're depressed. Like, he seems like he could really have a calming effect when you're upset, or help cheer you up when you're down. Lloyd really doesn't disappoint.

And Zelos. Oh god, Zelos. I can really, really see him like this. He always seemed a bit mellower to me after he "dropped the act," you know?

I really wish I had some helpful constructive criticism, but nope. This was awesome.

This is a pretty interesting perspective. I think this is a good story. Very personal and memorable.

I'm not all for this couple (Even if i still enjoy their moments :P) but i loved your story! Hehe Lloyd's words made me tear up too. I really like it, and all of Lloyd's speeches.

I think I'm gonna read it again! Ciao!