How... interesting. Your writing style is a joy to read.

Aheheh.

I didn't read that it was Kingdom Hearts and then I saw Riku and Sora lol

How do you write like its set in the olden days so well? Do you study old Literature? Something about your writing just calls out the "old" feel of writing.

Well, besides your writing, everything is great! I can't wait to see what Sora, Donald and Goofy will bring to the story next! Well, if it follows the story of KH2, then I'll know lol

But you get what I mean!

Update soon!

In that order. Exactamento, dawg!

I love Auron, but he never gets enough love. Man, I'm pretty sure he's less popular than DiZ! So, this was epic. Auron is really hard to write and you held your own rather well. He didn't do anything weird or un-Auronish! And Sora is acting ridiculously adorable, as usual. It would be great to have Goofy and Donald show up a little more. I'd love to see what Auron would think of them. It'd be ...interesting.

The writing is cryptic and lyrical, an interesting choice. It spices up the reading experience. My taste in literature is like L's taste in food. Sweet and strange. I'm sick of literary gruel. It like a refreshing experience. :D

This, especially the first part, was lovely. You don't get much Auron love in the KH section.

I definitely enjoyed it. :)

(One bit of criticism, though-Riku is described here as being short, and he's definitely very, very tall.)