Holy fuck... Please continue this and update soon... This was a wonderful read.

*chokes* Oh... My... Fuck... I fucking live for this shit... I Love this shit! That sudden 'action' from Kidd at the end was absolutely beautiful... A completely and utterly perfect way to show his utter insanity. And honestly author, I fucking love writing and reading about insane characters too.

Do something with yetis! Lol. Or robots 8D
Love that you aren't skipping the two years! All new content with no regurgitation of canon yayyyyyyyyy~~~~

What about the mermaid? Did it just…flop away?

I feel like this story is mainly based on Luca. It's actually annoying me x

How to find out Luca's natural hair color: look for the only color of hair dye that ISN'T there! xD

Your history is really good i like both of ours OCs but my favorite is Luca

This should not stop. I think that kinda left out many other possibilities of horrible happening. If you are not planning to update this story, atleast make it sound like it ended!

She has to beat up Law at some point. And Cayenne has to , make him respect her! Maybe they can meet on the same island as Cougar. But dont see each other till an explosion draws the kidd pirates to where the heart pirates are... Theyre just ideas, I would n a flattered used them but you dont have to... I have to say though its a real excitinv story reeeaaally draws you in. . I cant wait for your next chapter.

cant wait for more please continue!

Please continue3 I personally find this very interesting

I don't think Law would act like this. I mean, he was clever for a reason, he's a good strategist. So when Luca escaped from him, he eould have used his ability 'ROOM' or anything, to trap her.

Damn, now I'm addicted to this story. Please updare soon ;;;.

Update immediately, please!

ahahahha I would never have guessed that she hates cats because she's allergic to them!