Awww. Very interesting and creative way to share Zuko's story. I also love the feels and the way to use fire bending.

Thanks for writing!

That was insane! I was completely absorbed and I can't wait to find out what happened next.

*happy noises*

zu! telling his own life story through storytelling medium! with other names aaah!

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY RIVETING AND I LOVE IT

'maybe, if the story goes on long enough, the badguy doesn't have to win in the end' i love this. it was one of those that kept echoing in my mind as i read the short rest of the story. it's hopeful and quiet and lovely.

Wow. So powerful, so evocative. Loved Toph's "What scar?". Loved Zuko's creative bending. Wonderful

Clever idea and good writing!

SEQUEL! PLEASE!

Well made, friend.
I realized the story that was rig told as soon as you mentioned the wife.
I was like "wait is this Iroh and Ozai?"

AMAZING

Amazing.
I love the way you told this story. It was both easy to follow and wonderful to read. I could almost see the fire-images, the way you described them.

I LOVED IT! XD

Good story. Very good.

This was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. The symbolism and parallels weren't immediately obvious to me, but when I caught on it all seemed brilliant. Really, truly, a wonderful story within a story.