| Reviews for Shinigami no Naruto: Power of the Soul |
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  Garbage chapter 4 . 4/12 Dropping this mangled and trash fick. I'm glad you abandoned part two. A more mature you probably realised your less mature writing was shit. Good day. |
| Garbage chapter 4 . 4/12 Turned Naruto into a less edgy Sasuke with an even blander personality. He seems to be immune to trauma, because he has no soul and no flaws. The stupid geta outfit with Sasuke and Anko accents confirmed that this is a self insert. Huge lack of romance also confirms that you're an incel-cuck-fag. Naruto also gets nerfed after EVERY power up for the sake of drama and struggle. TROPEY AS FUCK. I'm sick of power scaling being random as f**k in fanfiction/manga/anime. You're just as bad as Tite Kubo. The ONE thing worse than an OP Naruto is a supposedly strong Naruto getting nerfed constantly. |
 TheEmbodimentOfSins chapter 7 . 10/16/2019 Listen here, Brat. That “bastard fox” has been keeping your injuries to a minimum for 12 years, he helped you during your shitty ass coma, he didn’t have to, he could’ve let you die and be reborn. so before you call my boy a bastard, I advise you learn what he’s been doing for your sorry ass. |
| Monster King chapter 27 . 7/12/2019 Great job |
| Adran06 chapter 17 . 7/11/2019 You should make sure to write names consistently. You have several of the names at the end of this chapter written in the Japanese style, and the others in English style. |
| bla chapter 3 . 4/19/2019 yeah so the story is about the great legendary ninja naruto who is the most efficient paperpusher in the elemental nations... i hope this does not go in this directions |
| rambo4163 chapter 27 . 4/8/2019 Amazing purely AMAZING |
| reymax88 chapter 20 . 2/19/2019 got shinigami power shikai still weak im done |
| Alechaos Ogigio 2 chapter 27 . 11/12/2018 beautiful story, can't wait to open the sequel |
| CelebTil chapter 6 . 11/4/2018 hello I just had to say I love the reference of... Domon Bayle Captain of the Spray with nine golden bees (symbol of Illian) embroidered on his coat...Just love the Wheel of Time reference on of the first I've seen. great story so far I'm gonna have to follow and fav just for that... P.S. huge fan of Robert Jordan. (so sad he didn't get to finish the series himself. Of course he did say they would be nailing shut his coffin before he finished.) |
| Thallion chapter 7 . 1/12/2018 is the mizukage Mei terumi or yagura? you kept switching saying he or she and the dialogue given could go either way. |
| sonic chapter 27 . 10/13/2017 I liked the epilogue! |
| HyperA1985 chapter 27 . 8/16/2017 I am looking forward to chapter 28 and I hope Naruto offers Kurama the nine tail fox a chance to get revenge on Obito Uchiha. |
| Hipnyah chapter 11 . 8/6/2017 ooooo politics! ... well i normally hate politics but only when I'm doing them lol I'm amazingly good thl add them ..anyway now that you've literally stepped into my forte, well done so far. i honestly only see 3 ways in life he could be politically happy...i think I'll just read on and see how you resolved the tension :3 |
| Hipnyah chapter 7 . 8/4/2017 2 things that irked me... 1 guy is wholely unnecessary the hokage would have sent it with just shinobi. no currier...and two it would easily be a "b rank" mission due to its importance and the fact that it is in another hidden village...the risk is too high to lead what could essentially be greenhorns into a high potential risk situation...otherwise great story so far...Tho part two is abandoned for now lol |
