Wow. Thats pretty good and really warm story. I like it very much. Thank you!

Awww, this is really cool :). I liked it so much _.

so i know that this is years old, but i just found it and i love it. it's wonderfully written and such an adorable story.

Addicting story. 3

So beautiful and cute! :3

i like this :)

Oooh I love this! Her devotion to him is so sweet, without being naive. It's nice to know that despite her lost love the prince, ariel finds some form of love. It's also nice to see Jack latching onto something for once (we don't really see that in the films, methinks) - Thanks for posting :D

awww! i loved it!

I really like this idea you had of twisting the Little Mermaid story into making Ariel the new Sea Witch. Good idea, nicely executed and an amusing read. Thanks!

*chuckles* nicely done. i find this story a well done one shot, unique with inspiration from several recognizable sources. Good sharp, tight package and i don't think it needs anything added or edited