See, here I was hoping you were doing some weird Raph/Shredder bromance-y stuff, rather than Mary-Sue. :( But this works out just fine as a parody.

Again what the FUCK?! You're making Master Splinter make no FUCKING damn sense!

Three words. What. The. FUCK!? What the hell making Master Splinter saying bullshit like that in chapter 6 and worst making the Shredder, of all the motherfucking people on this whole damn planet, fall in FUCKING LOVE?!

Ah I see I didn't escape your wit! Good job I can laugh at myself eh? I know my first fic was awful. The whole thing is very funny. The 'friend' comments were priceless.

Awww, what an ending. I thought it was funny that Maryssa chose both of them and ended up being happy. I can see why you wouldn't do this again as it would be hard to top it. But, hey, this was a great experiment, and you did a good job with it. So nicely done.

Oh, and no problem on the reviewing. I always like to help out fellow writers.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Yes, Shadestrike is awesome and all powerful. I can't wait to see what else happens next. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Ah, that was funny. I really liked it, especially all of the jokes you used there and the repeat of choose or lose. So, is this the end of the story? Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

You don't need to write a guide, all novice fan fic writers should be directed here! I'm guilty of implementing at least half of this (argh, the shame!) but i'm finding this absolutely, side achingly funny. Keep writing, it's brilliant :D

Oh, man, that was hilarious. My favorite part was when Splinter and Carly got together. It was just funny, especially how Splinter was talking like Mikey. Nicely done. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

That was hilarious, DOT. I liked how they had to pay for their inoculations and Shredder's fave restaurant. That was great. Can't wait for more for sure.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

That was hilarious. I loved the super ninjary powers the Foot Elite had. Great job on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Ah, I've seen things like that, too, in horrible fics. You did great with this one. I loved the Lion King crossover and how Maryssa tried to warn Mufasa, but he just ignored her and ending up dying anyway. I also loved the reference to turtlecest. That was hilarious. Aww, Leo can't go to bed without his night night kiss. Poor guy! Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Oh man, that was freakin' hilarious. "Oh pyramid" had to be my favorite line ever. And I love how the Turtles put a dating site for Splinter and the ray. That was just awesome. This is the best bad fic ever, and I never say that. Nicely done.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

BWAAHAHA! "They began fighting, hitting, kicking, punching, shoving..." So descriptive. :D

Oh, man, I'm so glad you updated this. It was hilarious, and I loved Shredder's and Raph's banter. That was funny. Good job on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell