Very sensual and sweet. But those hilarious last 2 lines this became priceless! LOL :) Nice job!

I love your fic!

Its really hot and brilliant!

I need read more, please.

Updating soon, please.

I need read soon next chapter, please.

I am so confused.

good story i loved this :) awsome job with my favorite couple lol..

I almost didn't review this, because I didn't think any words I'd type could possibly describe how amazing -no, brilliant this was. I couldn't have asked for a better story than this. Firstly, I loved how you formatted this -writing different snapshots with the Roman numerals- it added a certain elegance to the story. Gentle!Stayne was amazing, and I can't tell you how many smut fics I read that have been awful. This however -while still retaining the smut- had a grace to it. It was very tasteful, and hot without being slutty like so many other stories. Plus, the idea that the Outlands really meant Alice's world? Brilliant. & Iracebeth at the end was hilarious.

All in all bb, just splendid! I do hope to read more from you, because you're writing style is addictive...like candy or coffee from Starbucks. There's something fluid about it, almost magical. When reading, I was actually transported to this world, and forgot everything.

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great story!

love it,hope you would write more!

if you have a chance would you like to watch my fan vid:

/watch?v6P-D7H6u4Sw&featurefvsr

it's called bad romance and it's an alice and stayne pairing,and at the end of the video she finds him in the real world just when she sails to china(he is all normal in victorian otfit _~,his hair in a ponytail(well thats how he looks)thank you!

Amazing story. It was written so well I was a little taken aback. So many smut stories are badly written and just plan awful, yours however was a fantastic read.

You should really write more!

And I do think Stayne/Alice may be my favorite pairing in Alice In Wonderland, behind (only slightly) Stayne/Hatter because I love a good yaoi every now and then.

Ridiculously hot. Just, wow.

While I'm not the biggest fan of this paring I truly love this story, the ending was my favorite though *smiles* If I might make a requestion, please write more, mainly of the three of them together and how they get along in Alice's world. I think you would do a great job with it.