That actually hurt. Omg I am crying But it was such a good story

This is beautiful! I've cried less at actual deaths than this one. Would you do another one where Hikaru dies and Kaoru survives? I imagine it would be very similar but still fairly different.

*thunderous applause*

I can say with certainty that when it comes to grief fics, none- and I mean NONE- can compare to this. Such a perfect study of Hikaru's character, and his dependance of his twin. And you write it so poetically and visually, it's breathtaking. I was captured and kept by your words, your phrases, you're small yet deliberate paragraphs. I'm truly touched by this fic, and it only makes me live the twins as a pair more.

Bravo, good writer. Bravo!

I'm going to cry forever now; I'm going to curl up in a ball, and cry until I rot. It was horrible, reading through this, even though it was so beautifully written, so amazingly done, but the rawness of Hikaru's emotions, and the hard cold fact that Kaoru (cute, sweet little Kaoru) is dead.

And I have a theory on why I'm so grief-stricken over it. Because, today, I plan on watching nothing but Ouran, just to try and convince myself that he's not dead, because this felt just so freaking real.

I have a cousin, okay? She lives in France, since my dad's side of the family is, and she, and my other cousin, and myself, are obsessed with Ouran. Anyway, we've been calling her Kaoru, and nothing but, for three years now, because she acts a lot like him; and they call me Hikaru, because I'm a lot like him, I'm only one month older than her, we're inseparable, and she's a hell of a lot nicer than me. Anyway, I kept imaging her, because when I hear the name Kaoru, she's always part of my thoughts, though not front in centre.

I guess I got attached.

Also, he died in the worst possible way; it's a running joke for me and my sister to make jokes like “Well, of course Hikaru had to go with him—he'll get distracted and fall out and window!” in reference to Kaoru's highly likely ADD. Another variation was, “He'll get distracted and get hit by a car!”

What a sick freaking joke.

Anyway, love you, love your writing. Thanks

That was really sad. Love it.

Well I'm sobbing

Well, I cried. That was really well written. Kudos to you!

Omg...I can not stop crying! You wrote this very well, you can just feel the very depths of poor Hikaru's grief...This was so wonderfully written, but oh so very painful to read...

my god… many tears, such cry T_T
words can't describe how good this is

Wow. You got really deep with this, it's beautifully dark and very in character with Hikaru.

This made me start crying! :(

I...just can't...why...You...killed...Kaoru...WHY? just WHY? Kaoru was the one i shipped people with!The person that made my stories of OHSHC whole!But...he died...since...I read this story...now, i can t get this image outta meh head man!

((P.S.:Konba wa. Don't take this the wrong way.I loved it but i did tend to have Kaoru to be my OC's crush...yeah...my OTP is HikaHaru but occasionally i tend to write/type up some KaoxHaru, KaoxOC, and HunnixHaruhi don't mind my endless ranting that could last a you and i shall take my leave.))

Lost it at this part:

I hate you for leaving me, Kaoru.

I hate you.

I hate you...

I don't hate you. I could never hate you. I didn't mean to say that I hated you. You know that, right? I just hate the impossible depths that I truly love you, because now it's mirrored exactly by a turmoil of lonely anguish.

"I love you, so, so much. Listen Kaoru, please. I love you."

Please believe me.

"I love you."

Come back to me.

"I- I- Kaoru, I-!

LOVED the story, this part that i took out, was basicaly raw emotions...thats what got to me... keep writting! (sucks at explaining)

I cry often when watching movies and series, but I hardly ever cry when reading a story. I did in this story though. This is the second story in my whole entire life that had me in tears.

The emotions were so raw, so alive and so real to the point that it's heart-wrenching and impossible not to feel for Hikaru. Your descriptions were amazing, causing me to clearly be able to picture every scene. I just love how everything we see is completely from Hikaru's view such as the lack of detail of the funeral compared to the very detailed emotions and how Tamaki and Haruhi remained faceless until they left the grave.

And oh gosh, my tears started to flow when Hikaru was starting that sentence, saying the first half of it again and again, waiting for Kaoru to finish it...That part seriously ripped my heart to shreds. The ending was equally as heartbreaking, but wonderful how you ended it with that sentence-complete. I could hear Hikaru and Kaoru's voice saying the sentence so clearly that it scared me.

So yes, great job on this story. It was wonderfully and beautifully written and I absolutely loved it. This is only the second of your works that I have read and I'm definitely going to be reading more from now on. :)

I almost cried so many times during this. I kept having to take a break so I wouldnt burst out in tears. Its still choking me with how sad this is! You really did a great job with it though.
(R.I.P. Kaoru Hitachiin T.T)
I.R.