That was the most realistic fan fiction story I have read. Althought, there could have been more romance/a kiss, but the point came across. The ending paragraph took me by surprise and I clutched at my heart. That was a PERFECT such beautiful words
stemming back to the 100th episode. Erica Messer should seek you out for approval to incorporate it into the Series Finalie. JJ and Hotch would be the perfect couple. Awesome!

Great story. Loved how Jessica was included.

Again I have to point out how well you write Hotch. He is, hands down, my favorite character on TV and you've managed to capture so many of the facets that I find so endearing in him. You've also managed to make Will's actions a little understanding and sympathetic - no easy task!

Seriously, seriously intrigued now. I think you've done a marvelous job getting the characters of the team down. I can see this playing out which makes for an even better read. :)

Oh look I found another one and now I'm intrigued. I seriously hope I don't get myself fired! :) But you know I have to go to the next chapter to find out why JJ is putting off going home...

**This is so fun, it's like putting on a jacket that you haven't worn in awhile and finding a wad of cash in the pocket! I am however reminded this is exactly why I try to stay off of FF while I'm at work...

Aww, that was really sweet and I enjoyed reading the different aspects of the story as it combined for a JJ and Hotch story, because I love them together!

I love it! i have seen a lot of jj/hotch stories and none of them are as good as this! love how henry was on hotchs lap and jack was on jjs. love it! 10/10! Xx

Whew, I got a little fangirly with this chapter. Intense Hotch is smoking hot.

sweet ending, i really liked the story!

YES. YES YES YES I AM A JOTCH FAN AND YOU HAVE MADE IT OFFICIAL FOR ME :D 3 now if only they could put more Jotch into CM... lol jk. :D

This chapter made my life. Seriously.

Why am I so sad by it? because it's over! This fic is over.

I wish it could continue on for 2000 chapters, even more. But it was an amazing story!

And I apologize for reviewing a bunch of chapters all at once.

- April

(because I can't ask a direct subordinate out on a date.)

The moment we've all been waiting so eagerly for!

(His question was answered even before he finished as the excited blonde launched herself into his arms.)

Oh, I think I just died a little from happiness.

This chapter, was by far my favourite. Why? Obvious reasons.

Well written and so adorable!

That's right, Jack! You teach your father that he belongs with JJ.

It's so obvious to everyone except for him and JJ.

I love Hotch's response about playing both parts.

And the last line! Yes, they belong together! A first step and a great Jotch moment.

Even the kids want them to get together.

This was so adorable. No words to describe.

*wonders if you will kill me for so many reviews*

But your story is just so amazing and they way you write it makes it believable for them to get together. 3 Like it could happen on the show.