Reviews for An Unexpected Secret |
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kaila chapter 1 . 3/30/2015 AMY IS PINK |
Liz chapter 1 . 8/20/2014 AWSOME make more ! |
teapot-spooks chapter 1 . 1/16/2014 OMFG SO FRIGGIN FLUFFY! X3 |
Jennyfer Cazorlla Jordan chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 mara |
puppylove chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 (Sniff) that... was... sooooo... cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! |
Winged Lion Spirit chapter 1 . 11/11/2012 good job :D |
KiratheHedgehog chapter 1 . 6/4/2012 I love werehog stories like this! Actually, I'm working on one that I hope to post, once I make an acount. I'll have to see your Yin story, too. :) |
speedyblue chapter 1 . 12/31/2010 that waz amazin' please write more stries like that please |
Galexia the Chao chapter 1 . 11/7/2010 Me: Cute story, although I have two suggestions that will make it even better. Silver: *randomly appears out of nowhere.*Or not. Me: *ignore* 1. Instead of using bold and italics to show whos thoughts it is, just say Amy's POV and Sonic's POV. It's much easier to understand. Silver: *whispers* She's just saying that cause she didn't read you're notes and couldn't figure out who's thoughts it was until the end of the story. Hehe, loser :P Me: Aww shattup Silver! Silver: *Shruggs* Not my fault that you're too lazy to bother reading those things anway. Me: *glares daggers at Silver* and 2. If you could start a new line whenever Sonic or Amy is speaking then that would be awesome. Silver: Well that's just because- Me: *smacks Silver in the head with her crowbar* Shut it Silver. Anyway very nice story! Super cute! :3 Silver: *sees little Chip's flying around* Yeah...cute...hey Chip doesn't have 3 heads... Chao Chao! -Galexia the chao |
Jenelle Lucia chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 I really love the story, and romance is one of the things I'm really obsessed with, so keep adding them to some stories! |
IHeartSonAmy chapter 1 . 6/12/2010 Awwwww! Sweet or what... I like the end bit where Sonic still teases her Chao ;) |
LOL12XD13 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010 That was awesome man! I totally loved it. Lol xD and it's like 4:00 in then morning and it kept my interest. Normally that doesn't work out. Good job above all! |
SilverDawn2010 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 That was really good! :) |
a person from florida chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 Lets be frank, please read Future Imperfect. i didn't get the point of this. IS SONIC CHEATING ON AMY WITH YIN? that is all. a person from florida |