Neuralysers only work on humans. And before anyone says wizards are humans, they are from the Discworld...

Great story! The dialogue was very in character and the humor was satisfyingly Pratchetesque. Although, I can't help but feel that Vetinari would have been able to handle her himself.

Would neuralysing even work? It's only effective on humans, and even if some of the people on the Discworld are human, they're, well, from the Discworld.

Absolutely hilarious!

Okay, fess up. Terry Pratchett is helping you write this, isn't he? It is just toooooooooo good.

"Pay's lower." LOL

lol "Ladies first." What a delightfully wicked thing to say.

Brilliantly done! J is funny in any universe and even more so with Rincewind. XD Thank you for writing this, it was brilliant!

These chapters just keep getting funnier and funnier! Love the bit with Rincewind and Eve. Absolutely hilarious!

This fic is brilliant! I have been laughing so much but even more so at this, Ridcully grinned. "I know just the wizard," he said brightly, "His danger sense is very keen."

Then I couldn't stop laughing. The writing style fits perfectly and is a ton of fun to read.

Really liked this - not sure why they're bothering to neuralyze everyone since nobody seems to be phased by the situation, but it's a nice idea and very well done.

interesting crossover i must say, you caught Rincewind's personality perfectly.

one question: what's discworld?

besides that this story totally ruled! I was laughing so hard my mom thought I was nuts. and my cat looked at me funny. maybe cause i'm listening to a song about people dying and gettign stuff chopped off, i dunno,. its not even my music. my cousin got a hold of my computer over the weekend...

heeheehee! Very funny - your style is amazing - I love these stories! The ending was gr8 2

INVISIBLE, SOUNDLESS NINJA MIMES! YAY! I can't stop laughing! and it's all your fault! "strenuous aerobic activity leading to heartattack"! HAHA! Man, I only wish there could have been more scenes with Vetinari, like when he learned exactly how the scantily clad women was going to inhume him! Heehee! I am going to be laughing over this for /weeks/!

Oh, this is so great... I added it to my Favorite Stories list, I love it! Must be the best fic in Discworld section, and that's a LOT! _ I'm looking forward for your next fic...