Reviews for The Mocking Moon
Guest chapter 8 . 2/14
"the teacher and the principle" is incorrect. It's PRINCIPAL. Just remember the princiPAL is your PAL.
tekmlb06 chapter 31 . 1/12
Good story
Silv7 chapter 31 . 12/27/2019
Ich bin beeindruckt von deiner Geschichte. Leider gibt es so was wirklich. Monster die nie rechzeitig entdeckt werden. Vieleicht findest du einen Weg um die Geschichte zum Abschluss zu bingen.
Ein großer Lob an dich
LaPumuckl chapter 27 . 4/18/2018
I've had some busy days so I skipped the reviews, hopefully you can forgive that.

And since there aren't many chapters left, this feels like a good point to stop reading until there's going to be an end for sure.

As I said before, I don't know why you stopped updating this one, I do hope one day you'll get back to it
LaPumuckl chapter 23 . 4/16/2018
:-)
LaPumuckl chapter 22 . 4/16/2018
That was one of the sweetest I love you that I know of
LaPumuckl chapter 21 . 4/16/2018
I think everyone has to be very proud of Bella here
LaPumuckl chapter 20 . 4/16/2018
This was a nice break
LaPumuckl chapter 19 . 4/16/2018
That was an incredible show of strength for both girls
LaPumuckl chapter 18 . 4/16/2018
Hopefully they can understand fast what triggered this reaction from Bella
LaPumuckl chapter 17 . 4/16/2018
That sounds like a lowest moment for Bella...
Alice pep talk was amazing!
LaPumuckl chapter 16 . 4/16/2018
I understand that both Edward and Alice needed a moment to get away from the situation to regroup within themselves. Both feel guilty that they didn't kept Bella from returning to Charlie and believe it was their responsibility to protect her and failed miserably
LaPumuckl chapter 15 . 4/15/2018
Oh no!
LaPumuckl chapter 14 . 4/15/2018
Disgusting how little persuading Charlie needed
LaPumuckl chapter 13 . 4/15/2018
Thank god Alice couldn't keep her promise
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