Sigh.

True story: I'd never actually considered Billy's perspective during the whole mess that was Breaking Dawn, but you've nailed it, of course.

This one will be super short:

I really like the push and pull here. It creates intriguing imagery.

You are fabulous.

I just tweeted about this.

OMG.

This is my absolute favorite of all of the drabbles you've written, bb. It's so visceral and sweet and sexy.

And fuck me, but it's JASPER.

GAH.

Thank you for sharing this, T.

Oh, man.

OK, so I'm pretty sure you know my feelings on Eclipse (that it pisses me the fuck off), but this made me want to re-read it.

You captured canon Bella extremely well, too, and I like the plethora of textural details you used here.

Nicely done!

I really like that there was literally no thought involved here - the scent hit and he ran, the end.

Makes Edward's superhuman ability almost seem ridiculous, if I'm honest. LOL.

At first, I thought this was in Biology. You are fantastic!

Sigh.

I love Darkward. Even if it's just for a moment. :)

This has always sort of freaked me out.

I can't imagine waking up, looking in the mirror and, aside from looking absolutely stunning, having vibrant red irises peering back at me.

Creepy.

Therefore, I think it's completely logical that her attention would focus there, at least initially. :)

I'm NGL. If I had the energy, I would write an Aro fic. I feel like he's intensely interesting and intensely creepy.

You've done a good job of showing his obsession here, as well as his determination in adding to his 'collection'.

Fabulous, lady.

Once again, you've make Jacob a sympathetic character.

And this: "The truth, however, was staggering."

...i think you've just summed up life in Forks.

:)

Aww.

My POV. haha. Just kidding.

I like this - to paint Angela as anything less than absolutely empathetic and sympathetic, all in one, would be inaccurate.

I like the tone of hope here, that she's waiting for her friend to return.

I love Carlisle. Like, love, love.

And this line:

It was with this knowledge that I embraced a different path.

Perfection.

Oh, Edward.

Sigh.

Emoward, done well, kills me.

And this was done well.

:dances:

Jasper. Yum.

This is one of my favorite scenes in the books, and I'm so glad you wrote it from his POV - I love your take on his view of Alice.

:)

Aww.

I simply adore the sense of detail here. You've managed to showcase his vampiric abilities without overdoing it, as many would have.

Love.

Oh, hell.

I remember being really effing angry with Jake, albeit momentarily, when he did this in BD. But here, with more rationale given to the act, I feel as though it was logical. Sensible, almost.

Great job, bb.