YOOOO THAT ENDING THO XD I feel like 2 days of my life was a lie when I read the last part lmao, 1 of the best plot twist I ever read btw XD XD XD

but really, I thought this story would take at least 20 chapters, but I'm glad u manage to make it shorter without skip any moment from the movie:'P

but the climax kinda confuse me... who's the real final boss here? viscount/Aleister or Lau?

That very last scene- here shall lay the bones of me, who died of laughter. RIP

Awh that ending! Adorable. Love this story :)

Ahhwww the ending made me chuckle, this is such a sweet fic! XD

...I LOVE THIS CONCEPT! And I've been looking for a father-son sort of fic for Kuroshitsuji for a while now, so I'm really excited to read on :)

You know, in the prolog the time limit for Sebastian is when the boy turns 13 but in the 3rd you have Ciel's current age at nearly 16. meaning that right now he is 15.
You might want to fix the age in the Prolog to 16 or 17.

Great story! I couldn't stop reading it for one second!

Awwww so cute! Like the movie.

Oh my gosh that was just like the movie! I swear you wrote like a professional you should totally become a writer!

LOL did you take the "there goes the baker with his tray like always..." from beauty and the beast? I started singing it in while i was on the couch and my dad walked in...

I prefer Sebastian and Ciel's relationship as lovers but father and son in a dream was surely amusing :D

You know what? I really like the lyrics that you change. I even tried to sing it with the original song and most of them match. Thanks for the story.

F yes! That was awesome! Beauty and the Beast kuroshitsuji style!

That was a very cute story :)

HA! The ending was so hillarious! I was not expecting that at all!