Good, no excellent, no totally KICK-ASS story! I think you managed to capture the flavor of the original "Slayers" very well! And I liked the subtle references to other stuff, like "Princess Bride' and Monty Python's "Search for the Holy Grail." I look forward to reading the sequel you mentioned!

Dude, just the SUMMARY got me laughing loudly. The story's very good! Keep up the great work!

Saiko-chan

"Life is like a box of chocolates ... you bite one and it's coconut."

Wow... Just... wow. This really was like watching Slayers. This was just plain fun to read. I think my favorite part of the story was art critic Sylphiel in chapter two. Pathetic isn't it. Fantastic work all around

Wow. This is so true to the Slayers series. I love it. Good job. _

I liked the last chaper best. you finaly added some humar to the story. you kinda gave a mis-interpatation to the story cuz of the sumrey. 'and the world was scewed.' I thought it would be funnyer but, I was wrong. oh, well. I am glad I read it.

bye bye

Mistress DragonFlame

"Sticks and stones my brake my bones but words will leave gashes that will feaster for all eternity..."

dayly addtion to saying:

"you should go and clean that out..." ;

Interesting slayer fic. it had the same feel as the show does, and the characters were more or less in character. Hope to read more of your works.

OMFG THAT WS SO KEWL! RITE MORE PLZ!11

Errr, just kidding. _* I finally got around to re-reading this. I notice that it isn't very different from the original, except that Lina no longer hits Jadarin with a rock. / You did an awesome job of keeping everyone in-character, I have to say, and although I personally would like a teensy bit more descriptive language that's really my only complaint. Now you should write a sequel, and put in a wacky inventor man who wears teddy-bear boxers and gets chased around by a homicidal duck. Yes, yes you should. _

I'd just like to say, this story Roxorz, but you probably know that. I love the way you right, you're funny, everyone's in character, and I've noticed that the names of the chapters are just like the names of the episodes. . Good job.

Amazing story! It was brilliant!

Very good story. Actually it was very confusing.

BRAVO! *claps, whoops, whistles, hollars, etc, etc, and all that praising stuff*

I have to tell you that I truly enjoyed this wonderful fanfic! Laughter, inturige, adventure, and most difficult of all, a great plot! If what you have planned for the next parts are anything like this first one, I will be itching to read them!

Good luck on writing them, because I wanna read them as soon as they're ready! This was a brilliant beginning to what I'm sure is to be a brilliant fic.

Tank-you for writing it. Heck, thank-you for dedicating time to write it. I eagerly await more.

Wonderfully written.

*claps* Bravo! Bravo! Pillow! Cookie!

*smiles* I hope you finish the next arc soon.

This was good.

This was good.