Enjoying it so far

KANE LIVES!

It's a shame it's been so long since you've updated, because your stories are simply of fantastic quality!
Sorry if you've said something about it somewhere, I haven't seen any mention.

A lot of people say that coincidence is a sign of bad writing. I think that's total crap, since coincidences happen all the time in real life.
And if anything, the coincidental arrival of Massani here, shows that coincidences can have beautiful, beautiful, totally chaotic results.

This is really rather awesome. Shame it's been un-updated so long. Wish there was more :)

This just came to me, I think tiberium would be a huge threat to a reaper. They don't know how to handle the stuff, the ion storms would knock out there means of flying.

And the tiberium would be slowly eating away at them from the inside out. Until it killed them.

In my opinion the best crossover Command and Conquer story out there. The Scrin are such a neat villain to have, especially in this universe. Command and Conquer world and it's units/technology are so creative and make for great story material. Its a shame there aren't more stories that take advantage of this, and it looks like this story won't be continued given how long its been since an update.

Here to drop a bit of "KANE LIVES AGAIN!"

Shame we don't have a future Anton Slavik slitting the throats of the Citadel Council as Kane rolls out his Rule of Thumb.

I really hope you continue this one day!

I'm loving the story but I feel like you went too big too soon. I mean Saren is nothing compared to a Battlemind and who cares about the Reapers? You've shown that the Scrin have far surpassed any human technology available. What's stopping them from ripping through humanity and the rest of the galaxy? How do you top the Battlemind literally killing Shepard? Kill her again?

I really enjoyed this story, the level of depth and consistency you give to your stories really is refreshingly good. The characters are written interestingly and the action is smooth and easy to follow. I will freely admit I'm sad to see this story on hold or cancelled as it hasn't been updated in several years. I hope to see it returned to as I find it more enjoyable than the base lore of either its source materials.

UPDATE WHEN
No really, Renegade and your Tiberium wars novellization are much more entertaining to read than your later works(yes I am talking about Vigil). Probably due to the fact that you didn't make an ugly mishmash of fandoms and force it into one crossover. I hope that you don't try to supplement your writing skill with cramming as much different universes as possible. You are one of the few people on this cesspool of the site whose stories are actually worth reading. Hell, you'll maybe even become a professional writer but that's just wishful thinking on my part I guess.
May your muse be kind to you.

This was amazing and seriously badass.

It saddens me greatly that t his story hasn't been updated in quite a long time, because it exhales quality. It is well-written, well thought off, and just plain fun.

It was a great read, but it itches me not knowing what happens next.

This really is a fascinating fic. If you ever side to update it, I'd love to read it.

I have a rebuttal!
However the Brotherhood came into possession of the intelligence and technology (advanced laser weaponry, ship stealth systems) they used to pull off that dramatic rescue, letting the GDI take possession of these assets, with their extensive industrial base and influence, would have yielded greater results in the long term.
Any takers?