This is too amazing to describe! You've so much talent!

This was absolutely amazing. It made me want to write one of my own. I always loved the story of timpani and Blumiere but I always wanted more of it. Awesome job :)

I BELIEVE I CAN FLYYYY
(I'm sorry XD)

This story is six years old. Will I still read it? Of course!
Holy moly I really thought Nastasia was dead. I mean yeah, she's an important part of the later story, but I was definitely scared for her in the heat of the moment. Well done!
Thank you for writing!

~Drift

Oh goodness...
Oh...
Why...?

So good! I enjoyed every second!

This is a brilliant fic. You are an excellent writer. I've recently finished Super Paper Mario in July and I am obsessed with Blumiere and Timpani, I even drew them as what they looked like in the game. The way you showed each of their emotions and thoughts is amazing. Perfect, absolutely perfect. I also did a Super Paper Mario fic talking about different for all characters if you're interested.

This is such a great story. An interesting take on things.

I know this was written quite some time ago, but I remember reading this several months back, before I had an account, and I was astonished. You did an amazing job on this fanfic.

I loved this story. I loved the emotion and feeling, the love, the heartbreak. It all worked together in a way that was beautiful. I admire the use of amazing words in this story, expressing emotions and showing paths. The description that described what was occurring at that moment was great. This story was definitely the best story I have ever read. Great work and keep up the amazing work.

Just want you to know: I love this fanfic so much, I made an account here just so I could favorite it and get to it quickly. Every vhapter is drenched in emotion, it just pulls at my heart strings!

I normally don't read fanfic out of fear of an author getting a character "wrong", but after reading this story I'm convinced that it is the true and intended back story to the game. I only wish you could have written something about the reunion between the two lovers at the end of the game. Regardless I thoroughly enjoyed this tale :)

This story made me so angry that I even felt sympathy...every last piece of it for Blumiere's plan of destruction. Seems like you succeeded.

And so begins the next of...SUPER PAPER MARIO!

It justs keeps getting better and better... you truly turned this story into a masterpiece