| Reviews for Underneath It All |
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natsuneyuuki chapter 27 . 5/5 I hate the last two chapters, the way you switch their personality is forceful. not suit the storyline at all. I regret reading it now |
tamer.of.the.wild.things.13 chapter 27 . 7/1/2015 I wasn't too sure about this story when I started because the beginning was so angsty but I'm glad I read the whole thing- thanks for writing. As proof, this is the fourth time I'm writing the review- which is a lot of effort for me anyways- as my phone keeps dam*well erasing my typing. Even though it's kind of twisted of me I really liked that they got revenge it's only a pity Sev didn't get to help. I also liked how Draco's mum finally stood up for him and how Jade's moment parallels Albus's epilogue moment- that was cute. I also loved how the twins mirrored Fred and George and how you made dealing with Harry's abuse real and painful- not glossy and toned down like many books and movies. There were other compliments and comments- but really this is the fourth time I'm writing that whole spiel- so thanks for the story and I'm done :) |
ChanceLove2 chapter 27 . 1/7/2015 loves it 3 |
Guest chapter 27 . 11/7/2014 *squeals with joy* this is no joke the cutist story I have ever read:) |
Guest chapter 27 . 10/19/2014 al i can say is that your writing has left me smiling for the first time in a long time. Don't know what that says about my mental sanity but still i'm happy to have read your story. |
kuroyuki96 chapter 27 . 10/2/2014 this was so sweet im so happy for the both of them |
ZianaSue chapter 27 . 5/4/2014 I really liked how the story went from horrible to absolutely giddifully happy ending. Although the horrible part was a bit too horrible for my taste. I do believe I just invented a word... Giddifully. |
docy chapter 19 . 8/16/2013 I facking love this fic. And you're an amazing facking authour. :O thank you. |
PotterHeadInBakerStreet chapter 2 . 2/26/2013 poor Draco! I always wanted that J.K Rowling writes more about him, and his childhood! I think that Remus and Severus are together! am I right? just to be sure, is Sirius dead? |
PotterHeadInBakerStreet chapter 1 . 2/26/2013 hi! I'm a new reader of your story, and even if you killed me here, i like it! it's deferent from the other story! |
Zanchev chapter 27 . 11/30/2012 This is an adorable story, despite the darker aspects, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing it :) Z |
MarquisOfSham chapter 1 . 2/15/2012 It's such a shame - I was really hoping to get into this fic but the inadequate spelling and grammar made it far too difficult for me to fare such an undertaking. |
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 27 . 10/21/2011 Amazing story, a little too ooc for my tastes, not a fan of ooc stories but I still enjoyed this. |
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 22 . 10/21/2011 I think Harry went a little too far with telling his friends that he and draco had sex. He didn't really need to do that. It's none of their business what Harry and Draco do together. |
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 4 . 10/21/2011 I really do like this story, just hate that Harry is so angry. Anyways, there are some words like, you put them as moreorless or whomever, well, it's more or less and whom ever. They are all separate words. |