This is beautiful. I'll check that link. Thanks so much for writing this. ;)

Awwwww... :D BEAUTIFUL!

Very serene. :)

All of your writing reaches the perfect medium...

Good luck with your writer's muse!

I love this, really! Thanks for making a sequel, I wish you would continue on when Aragorn departs from Arwen and then they meet again in Rivendell. Perhaps after the war too when they get married? Please?

Oh, oops, sorry. I didn't realize there was a second part to this. I liked liks conclusion, and of course the whole watching the stars and dancing under the mallorn trees was very romantic and atmospheric. Well done.

Good as always. I like how you write Aragorn and Arwen. Arwen suddenly thinking she wanted to bear Aragorn's children after seeing his hot, bare body made me laugh with glee. And his embaressment was hilarious, too. What I didn't get though is why you chose to end it on a slightly saddened note? It seemed kind of abrupt.

Happy Easter belatedly to you too! Such a lovely story...

*happy sigh* This is such a beautiful story, Linda! I loved how you described Lothlorien in this chapter!

Very beautiful story! And very timely as I just returned from a friend's bridal shower.

I loved this! This line in particular, "Time passed; days or weeks, they knew not, for it seemed as if they lived in some beautiful dream. Time passed differently in Elven Realms, or so it seemed to Men." It shows how idyllic the time A/A spent in Lothlorien was.

Very lovely, and nice to see how they became engaged. This makes a nice Easter treat.

- Deandra

It was a hard decision for Galadriel, to encourage the love of her granddaughter... I like that you show also Galadriel's part here. The moment when Arwen realized that she wants to bear Aragorn's children was very sensual, she was a true woman here, not a distant elven lady. And Galadriel guessed it, didn't she? "the healers assure me that he is a strong man who could father healthy children"... Practical grandmother!

Short, simple and good! I love the last line! Oh and will there be a continuation?

What a last line. That rings so truly for elves; I myself would rather be human than elf.

I like how Arwen notices the little things about Aragorn, like how he laughs, and whatnot. She's not just falling in love with the vague image of him, like I think Eowyn did a little later (not to mention the rest of it, of course); she's fallen in love with all of him, all the little quirks and personality traits and things about him. That, to me, seems like true love.

Aragorn mentions "Gil Estel"? Who is that?