SPECTACULAR
PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON

This was really cute! I hope you come back and finish it.

Oh , I read up to now, more intrigued with each chapter and it ended. Did you ever write a conclusion?

After this i totally want to draw chibi versions of the 4 year old crew.

Totally Shiny!

And cute too,

Uh oh, Jaynes in trouble! again lol... no wonder Rivers so mad at those companions lol this is very interesting, i cant wait 2 see what happens next :-) thanks for this great story! ive really enjoyed readin this!

thank you very much for the update, and i look forward to more.

so glad to see another chapter - so sad about mal's coat

can't wait for more of this funny tale

YAAAY! The Triumphant return! TSFRT?

"Even if it was Mal's." lol. thanks for the update loved it as usual. thanks, and can't wait for mroe.

lol loved it

Very cute! I especially got a kick out of Jayne being cuddled by the companions and complimented on his daddy's incredible prowess in bed (which apparently set River on a violent if non-lethal rampage out of jealousy).

Huzzah, you return! Perhaps with more Rayne in the next chapter?

well that was one hell of a shindig.! Seriously though..a plan of Mal's work? Why do I just know nothing is going to go right.

Love the story detail. You've really got the characters dead to rights.

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"With straws!" Jayne bouncing in glee at the whores fighting over him. Mal slapping people with his coat. All so freakin' hilarious! I died laughing more than once this chapter. So so funny. Thanks a million for this.